Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, grammatically correct, and directly answer the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), correct grammar (use articles and tense), and add one brief specific detail. Keep to maximum 2–3 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I did borrow my cousin’s bicycle sometimes to ride around the neighborhood, and I enjoyed short rides after school.

제안: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples using linking words. Improve grammar (e.g., 'popular', 'young people', 'long road trips', 'hill stations') and avoid vague phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word like 'because' or 'for example'.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many young people ride motorcycles or bicycles for commuting and for long road trips to hill stations at weekends.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was child, but I have a bicycle that I used to ride.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle that I used to ride.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child' (article error, treated here under past tense context because age reference is past). Also 'I have a bicycle that I used to ride' mixes present perfect and past habitual; since the question asks about childhood, use past tense 'I had a bicycle that I used to ride' to keep past-time consistency. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'child' and use past tense 'had'.

× Definitely, bikes are much popular in my country.

✓ Definitely, bikes are very popular in my country.

The collocation 'much popular' is incorrect; 'popular' is modified by 'very' or 'quite', not 'much'. Use 'very popular' to strengthen the adjective. Suggestion: replace 'much' with 'very'.

× Mostly youngsters prefer to ride a bike because it is their passion or they often use their bike to go on big Rd. journeys such as on hill stations.

✓ Mostly youngsters prefer to ride a bike because it is their passion, or they often use their bikes to go on long road journeys to hill stations.

There are several issues: 'their bike' should agree in number with plural 'youngsters' so use 'their bikes' (pronoun/number agreement). 'big Rd. journeys' is unnatural and incorrectly abbreviated; use 'long road journeys'. 'such as on hill stations' is awkward; use 'to hill stations' or 'to go to hill stations'. Also add a comma before 'or' for clarity. Suggestion: ensure plural agreement, avoid abbreviations, and use natural prepositions ('to hill stations').