Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Content is relevant but grammar, fluency and clarity need work. Improve subject-verb agreement, article use, and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and redundant phrases.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people choose bicycles for short trips because they are cheaper and easier to park. Moreover, roads in cities are often crowded, so riding a bike can be faster than driving a car.

× And in my, I think my bike are popular in my country instead of the car and then the other private, uh, vehicle and uh, the people prefer to use bike instead of on car.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country instead of cars, and people prefer to use bikes rather than cars.

The original sentence has several issues: incorrect pronoun phrase 'And in my,' is unnecessary and unclear; 'my bike are' mixes singular possessive with a plural verb — use 'bikes are' for general statement (plural subject and plural verb) (problem type 27 Subject-verb agreement and 12 pronouns); 'instead of the car and then the other private, uh, vehicle' is wordy and uses incorrect articles — use plural 'cars' for general contrast (problem type 22 Article errors/1 Singular and plural issue); 'the people prefer to use bike' uses singular 'bike' after 'people' — should be plural 'bikes' (singular/plural issue); 'instead of on car' has incorrect preposition 'on' — use 'than' or 'rather than' for comparison (problem type 11 Incorrect use of prepositions and 25 Comparative and superlative errors). Suggestion: simplify the sentence into a clear general statement with plural nouns and correct prepositions: 'I think bikes are popular in my country, and people prefer to use bikes rather than cars.' This fixes subject-verb agreement, noun number, article use, and preposition choice.