Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Uh, no. I don't think bikes are very popular, but when I was a child my friends had bikes and I borrowed borrowed them from them.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 70.0제안: Сделайте ответ более естественным и расширьте его кратким объяснением, используя связку. Избегайте односложных ответов; добавьте тему и одну-две поддерживающие фразы (не более 5 предложений).
예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I often borrowed my friends’ bikes to ride around the neighborhood. I remember enjoying short rides to the park on weekends because there weren’t many bike paths near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 65.0제안: Уберите междометия и повторения, дайте более структурированный ответ с причинами и примером. Используйте связку (например, "because" или "however") и конкретный пример, чтобы показать глубину мысли. Не более 4–5 предложений.
예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for convenience. However, when I was a child many of my friends owned bikes, and I used to borrow theirs to ride to the local park or school on weekends.
문법
× I borrowed borrowed them from them.
✓ I borrowed them from my friends.
The sentence repeats 'borrowed' twice, which is a repetition error rather than a verb form error; also 'from them' is redundant after naming 'my friends'. Use a single past simple verb 'borrowed' to match the past context and a clear object 'my friends'. Suggestion: remove the duplicate word and clarify the object: 'I borrowed them from my friends.'
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