Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is brief and directly responds, but contains a grammatical error and an incorrect verb choice (“write” instead of “ride”). Improve by using the correct verb, adding a clear topic sentence, and one short supporting detail. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences. Use a linking word if you add a reason or detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was seven, and I practiced every weekend with my older brother. Because I rode so often, I became quite confident cycling around my neighborhood.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives a reason, but contains an error (“after offer”) and could be clearer with better word choice and a linking word. Improve by correcting the phrasing, using one linking word (e.g., “because” or “especially”), and adding one specific example or context to support your point. Keep the response concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because they offer a cheap and efficient way to avoid traffic congestion. For example, many commuters use folding bikes to combine cycling with public transport during rush hour.

× Yes, I started learning to write a bike when I was 7.

✓ Yes, I started learning to ride a bike when I was 7.

The verb phrase 'learn to write a bike' is incorrect because 'write' is the wrong verb. The correct verb for using a bicycle is 'ride'. This is a verb choice error that involves the verb + -ing structure 'learn to + base verb'. Suggestion: use 'learn to ride' for acquiring the skill of using a bicycle. Use 'ride' not 'write'.

× Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas where they after offer a cheap and efficient way to avoid traffic congestion.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas, as they often offer a cheap and efficient way to avoid traffic congestion.

The original sentence has word order and word-choice problems: 'where they after offer' is incorrect. The phrase should link cause and result; use 'as' or 'because' and the adverb 'often' (not 'after') before the verb 'offer'. This is a sentence structure and adverb placement issue. Suggestion: place the adverb before the main verb ('often offer') and use a correct connector ('as' or 'because') or rephrase 'where' to 'which' or a comma plus 'as'.