Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short, contains grammar and word-choice errors, and does not directly address the past tense question. Use past tense, give a clear topic sentence, and add one brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, and briefly explain why or give a memory.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour’s bike to ride in the park.

제안: Your answer tries to say bikes are popular but has repetition, unclear phrasing, and grammar mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because or so). Keep sentences coherent and avoid repeating words. Mention concrete evidence (e.g., many people use bikes, bike lanes, or affordable prices).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, cities have dedicated bike lanes and you can see crowds of cyclists in the mornings and evenings.

× No, I don't have any white.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and incorrect here. Also 'any white' is ungrammatical: likely they meant 'a bike' or 'one'. Use 'didn't have one' for correct negative past. Suggestion: use the past simple for facts about the past (I didn't have a bike / I didn't have one).

× For me, yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country because I I have so many, I so many people to write to write it.

✓ Yes. I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them.

This sentence has multiple problems: repetition ('I I', 'to write to write it') and awkward wording. 'The bikes are popular' is unnatural; use plural general noun 'bikes are popular' without the definite article. The clause 'because I I have so many, I so many people to write to write it' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely the speaker wanted to say 'many people use them' or 'there are many bikes/people who use them'. The corrected sentence uses simple present tense ('are popular') for a general fact and clear phrasing. Suggestion: avoid repeating words, drop unnecessary articles before general plural nouns, and express cause with a clear subject and verb (many people use them).