Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and minor grammar errors (e.g. "the TV" → "TV"). Also keep within 1–3 sentences to sound fluent.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. I stayed at home a lot and watched TV, so I never learned to ride one or needed one for getting around.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar, be specific and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concrete details or examples using linking words (e.g. "for example", "in Beijing"). Watch subject-verb agreement ("almost everyone is able") and word choice (use "bikes", not "bags").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, in Beijing many people cycle to work or school because it's convenient and often faster than driving in heavy traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I always stayed at home and watched the TV.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I always stayed at home and watched TV.

The phrase 'watched the TV' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before a general activity. In English, when referring to watching television in general, use 'watch TV' without 'the'. Suggestion: say 'watched TV' or 'watched television'. This keeps the past tense consistent with 'didn't have' and 'stayed.'

× Of course, bags are very popular in China. Almost everyone are able, almost everyone is able to ride a bike in the street.

✓ Of course, bikes are very popular in China. Almost everyone is able to ride a bike in the street.

Two errors: 'bags' is likely a slip for 'bikes' (word choice, but treated here as vocabulary); more importantly 'Almost everyone are able' has subject-verb agreement error. 'Everyone' is singular and requires singular verb 'is' or the phrase 'is able' or better 'is able to.' Corrected to 'Almost everyone is able...' or 'Almost everyone is able to ride a bike.' Also replaced 'bags' with 'bikes' to match meaning. Suggest practicing subject-verb agreement with indefinite pronouns like 'everyone.'

× And in Beijing, where I live, bike is a popular way to go to work.

✓ And in Beijing, where I live, the bike is a popular way to go to work.

The noun 'bike' here refers to the general mode of transport and needs an article. Using 'the bike' or better 'bicycles' plural is more natural: 'bicycles are a popular way' or 'the bicycle is a popular way.' Also there is subject-verb agreement / article usage: singular 'bike' with singular verb form requires an article. Suggested improvement: 'bicycles are a popular way to go to work' or 'the bicycle is a popular way to go to work.'