Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and limit to at most five sentences. Also correct tense and word choice (use past tense, say “given to me” not “gifted being me”). Mention one concrete memory or effect of having the bike.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me and it was bright yellow, which I loved. It helped me become more confident riding in the neighborhood, and I practiced almost every day until I could ride without training wheels.

제안: Make the answer clearer and more fluent by using a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points connected with linking words. Fix grammar (use present simple for general facts), avoid absolute statements like “all the people,” and give concrete reasons or examples (e.g., affordability, traffic, short distances). Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them because they are affordable and easier to park in busy cities, and in emergencies they can reach places faster than cars. As a result, bikes are a common choice for daily travel.

× Yeah, generally I have a bike when I were a child and it is often gifted being me by by my father.

✓ Yeah, generally I had a bike when I was a child and it was often given to me by my father.

Errors: 'have' should be past tense 'had' because the time reference is 'when I was a child' (present tense issue). 'were' is incorrect for first person singular; use 'was'. 'is often gifted being me by by my father' is ungrammatical: use past passive 'was given to me by my father'. Suggestions: Match verb tenses to the time frame (use past for past events), use correct past forms ('had', 'was'), and form passive with 'be' + past participle ('was given') and correct preposition 'to'.

× It is yellow in color.

✓ It was yellow.

Error: Using present tense 'is' conflicts with past context; this also includes redundant phrase 'in color'. Suggest using past tense 'was' to match earlier sentences and concise phrasing 'yellow'. If keeping present because the bike still exists, say 'It is yellow' but maintain consistent tense.

× It it helps me to enhance my skills like walking.

✓ It helped me improve my skills, such as riding.

Errors: Tense inconsistency — 'helps' present vs past narrative; use past 'helped'. 'Enhance my skills like walking' is incorrect word choice: riding not walking. 'to improve' is more natural than 'to enhance' here. Also duplicate 'It it' should be single 'It'. Suggestions: Use appropriate verb tense, choose accurate verbs/nouns ('ride'/'riding'), and avoid unnecessary infinitive markers when simple verb works.

× Here definitely bikes are popular in my country because all the people are totally depend on bike for everything if they want to go anywhere or in the emergency really was the only reason that is bike that helped me to carry them.

✓ Yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country because many people depend on bikes for everything when they need to go anywhere or in an emergency; bikes are often the only option that helps them get around.

Errors: Tense and agreement problems — start with present simple 'are' is fine, but phrase 'are totally depend' is incorrect: use 'depend' (present simple) without 'are'. 'All the people' is better as 'many people' or 'people'. 'If they want to go anywhere' should be 'when they need to go anywhere'. The clause 'or in the emergency really was the only reason that is bike that helped me to carry them' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; rewrite clearly: 'in an emergency bikes are often the only option that helps them get around.' Suggestions: Use correct subject-verb forms (people depend), improve cohesion by using appropriate conjunctions ('when', 'or in an emergency'), and keep tense consistent (present simple for general facts).