Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with tense and word choice, and make your answer natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (e.g. “I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating synonyms without reason (bike vs bicycle) and keep sentences short (max 5).

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I did own a small balance bicycle for a year, which helped me learn to balance before I switched to a regular bike.

제안: Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Begin with a direct opinion, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, and, so). Avoid filler sounds and redundant phrases like “branded brands.” Use plural/singular forms correctly (the younger generation is interested).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many young people prefer sport bikes and scooters made by well-known manufacturers, and they often ride them to work or university.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child, I just have a bicycle.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child; I just had a bicycle.

Tense error: The speaker mixes present simple ('don't have', 'have') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past simple for actions or states in the past. Change 'don't have' to 'didn't have' and 'have' to 'had'. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or a conjunction for correct sentence structure.

× Most of young generation is interesting with different uh types and different branded brands of bikes.

✓ Most of the young generation are interested in different types and different brands of bikes.

Multiple issues: 1) Article and noun phrase: 'Most of young generation' needs the definite article 'the' and would more naturally be 'Most of the young generation' or 'Most young people'. 2) Subject-verb agreement: with 'Most of the young generation' meaning many people, use plural verb 'are'. 3) Wrong verb and preposition: 'is interesting with' is incorrect; the correct passive/experiencer structure is 'are interested in'. 4) Redundancy and word choice: 'different uh types and different branded brands' is redundant; use 'different types and different brands' or simply 'different brands'. Combine these corrections to form a natural sentence.