Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak more fluently and avoid repetitions; use a clear topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details with correct grammar and concise phrasing. Mention the bike briefly, state one or two specific details (color, age, training wheels, who gave it), and use past tense consistently. Use linking words like “and” or “also” sparingly and accurately.

예시: Yes, I did. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood every afternoon.

제안: Correct common grammar and word-choice errors and make the response more coherent: start with a clear opinion, then provide two specific reasons using correct comparative forms and linking words (for example, “because,” “so,” “therefore”). Be concise and avoid repeating words. Use proper verb forms and articles.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and much easier to park than cars in crowded areas, so many people choose them as an affordable way to avoid traffic jams.

× It was a it was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents want me for my 7th birthday.

✓ It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my 7th birthday.

The verb 'want' is present tense and incorrect in this past-time context. The action of giving occurred in the past, so the past tense 'bought' is required. Use the past simple for completed actions at a specific time in the past (my 7th birthday). Also remove duplicated phrases ('It was a').

× I ride. I used to ride.

✓ I used to ride it.

The sentence 'I ride' is a simple present form that conflicts with 'used to', which expresses a past habitual action. The context asks about childhood, so use past habitual 'used to ride'. Combine into one clear past statement: 'I used to ride it.'

× Yes, bike floor in my country because they are convenient for short trips and and much easy to park than a car in many crowded place.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are convenient for short trips and much easier to park than cars in many crowded places.

Multiple issues: 'bike floor' is incorrect word choice; 'bikes' (plural) requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Much easy' should be comparative 'much easier'. 'Than a car' should be plural 'than cars' to match general comparison. 'Place' should be plural 'places'. Fixing agreement and comparative adjective forms makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× People prefer bikes since they are affordable and help avoiding traffic jam.

✓ People prefer bikes since they are affordable and help avoid traffic jams.

After 'help' use the base form of the verb (help avoid) or 'help in avoiding'; 'help avoiding' is ungrammatical in this context. Also use plural 'traffic jams' for a general statement. Change to base form for correct verb pattern.