Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has grammar errors and is unnatural. Use past tense consistently and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences). Add a linking word if you expand. For example, correct tense: “I had a bike when I was a child.” Then add a brief supporting detail such as who you rode with or where you used it.

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to visit my friends and explore the neighborhood, and it helped me feel independent. For example, I often cycled to the park every Saturday with my sister.

제안: Your answer is understandable but informal and vague. Avoid filler words like “umm” and use clearer reasons or specific examples. Start with a direct topic sentence, then use linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “also”) and give a specific reason or statistic if possible.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, I often see commuters cycling to work in the mornings, and several cities have dedicated bike lanes that encourage cycling.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child.' Use past tense 'had' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use consistent tense—use past simple for completed past situations (I had).

× I think yes, bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original phrase 'I think yes' is awkward. Reordering to 'Yes, I think' places the affirmative response first and keeps present simple 'are' which correctly describes a general truth. Suggestion: put the brief yes/no answer before 'I think' for natural spoken English.

× This is because I saw some people umm roaming around using bikes.

✓ This is because I saw some people roaming around on bikes.

Using both 'roaming around' and 'using bikes' is redundant. Also, native speakers typically say 'on bikes' rather than 'using bikes.' Keep the -ing form 'roaming' but remove 'using' and replace with preposition 'on' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: avoid redundant verb phrases and use common prepositions for modes of transport (on a bike).