Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: ตอบได้ชัดเจนและมีเหตุผล แต่ควรสั้นลงและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น แบ่งประโยคให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างง่ายเมื่อต้องให้รายละเอียด เช่น "so" หรือ "which" และเพิ่มตัวอย่างหรือความรู้สึกสั้น ๆ เพื่อให้คำตอบครบถ้วนและน่าสนใจมากขึ้น

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father encouraged me to ride so I would get more exercise and avoid spending too much time on mobile games. I enjoyed cycling around the neighborhood with my friends, which made it fun and healthy.

제안: คำตอบตรงประเด็นแต่ซ้ำคำและขาดรายละเอียดเฉพาะ ควรยกตัวอย่างสถานการณ์หรือสาเหตุเพิ่มเติม เช่น ปัจจัยด้านโครงสร้างพื้นฐาน ความปลอดภัย หรืออากาศ และเชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: Not really. Most people prefer cars because they are more convenient for long trips and families. Also, limited bike lanes and hot weather make cycling less practical in many cities, so few people choose bikes for daily travel.

× I used to have a bike when I was younger because my father wanted me to do more outdoor activities so that it could help strengthen my body and I could spend other time rather than playing games on mobile phone.

✓ I used to have a bike when I was younger because my father wanted me to do more outdoor activities so that it would help strengthen my body and I could spend my time doing things other than playing games on my mobile phone.

The modal 'could' in this context is awkward for expressing purpose or likely outcome; 'would' is more appropriate to indicate expected result in the past. 'Spend other time' is incorrect collocation; use 'spend my time doing things other than...' Also 'playing games on mobile phone' needs article and possessive: 'on my mobile phone'. Use the -ing form 'doing' after 'spend time'.

× Not really, because Thai people usually use car more frequently and it is understandable.

✓ Not really, because Thai people usually use cars more frequently, and that's understandable.

Countable noun 'car' needs plural 'cars' when speaking generally about people. The phrase 'it is understandable' is grammatically correct but awkward; 'that's understandable' is natural. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× This is because cars are usually more convenient and you can use it to travel long distances.

✓ This is because cars are usually more convenient and you can use them to travel long distances.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers back to plural 'cars'; use plural pronoun 'them'.