Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: số ít/ số nhiều, thì). Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại xe hoặc tuổi bạn có xe). Sử dụng từ nối nếu cần mở rộng ý.

예시: Yes, I did. I grew up in Vietnam, and most children there had bicycles when I was young. For example, I received my first bike at age seven — it was a simple red one that I used to ride to school every day.

제안: Cần dùng thì chính xác và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, rồi dùng liên từ (for example, however, nowadays) để so sánh quá khứ và hiện tại. Tránh nói lắp và sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ "bikes are" không phải "bikes is"). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về sự thay đổi (lý do, thời gian, hậu quả) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

예시: Yes, bikes used to be very popular about ten years ago when I was a child. However, nowadays more people prefer motorbikes and cars because of faster commuting and urban development. For instance, in my hometown many families replaced bicycles with scooters as roads and incomes improved.

× Yes, of course, I was born in Vietnam and I think every children in my country, uh, have have they are Michael Bike.

✓ Yes, of course, I was born in Vietnam and I think every child in my country has a bicycle.

The noun 'children' is plural but paired with 'every' which requires a singular noun 'child' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Also 'have have they are Michael Bike' is incorrect word choice and structure; use 'has a bicycle' to show possession. Suggestion: use 'every' + singular noun, and use correct verb 'has' for singular subject, and replace informal or incorrect words with 'bicycle'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× 10 years ago, when I was a kid, uh bikes is very popular in the country, but nowadays in the develop the development of society and uh buys, people tend to ride motorbike and cars.

✓ Ten years ago, when I was a kid, bikes were very popular in the country, but nowadays with the development of society and business, people tend to ride motorbikes and cars.

Multiple issues: '10 years ago' sets past time so verb must be past tense 'were' not 'is' (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 5). Also 'bikes' plural requires plural verb 'were' (subject-verb agreement, Grammar Problem Type 27). The phrase 'in the develop the development of society and uh buys' is ungrammatical; replace with 'with the development of society and business' (Grammar Problem Type 26 sentence structure and 11 preposition use). 'Motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' when contrasted with 'cars'. Suggestion: match tense to time expression, ensure plural subjects take plural verbs, and use clear nouns like 'development' and 'business'. Grammar problem type ID: 6,27