Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: use correct verb forms and articles, make sentences concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Avoid repetition (e.g., "used to" twice) and unnecessary words.

예시: No, I didn't own a bike as a child. However, I often borrowed a bicycle and rode around my neighborhood with classmates after school, which helped me build confidence and discover new streets near my home.

제안: Clarify and organize ideas: give a clear topic sentence, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "for example"). Correct grammar and avoid filler words and repetition. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "terrain," "off-road routes").

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because of the varied terrain and many off-road routes. For example, adventurous riders enjoy exploring hilly trails across Nepal, and motorcycles are also a practical choice for daily travel in rural areas.

× I remember I used to riding bicycle after school finish with my colleagues around the my home premises.

✓ I remember I used to ride a bicycle after school finished with my colleagues around my home.

The phrase 'used to' requires the base form of the verb, so 'riding' should be 'ride'. 'After school finish' is incorrect tense/order; use past tense 'after school finished'. Include the article 'a' before 'bicycle' and remove the extra 'the' before 'my home'. Suggestion: Use 'used to' + base verb and match surrounding verbs to past tense.

× I remember I used to riding bicycle after school finish with my colleagues around the my home premises.

✓ I remember I used to ride a bicycle after school finished with my colleagues around my home.

The preposition 'around' is fine but 'the my home premises' contains incorrect article + determiner and awkward noun choice. Replace with 'my home' for natural phrasing. Also 'premises' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use simple 'around my home' for clarity.

× It really helps to develop my confidence regarding riding on bicycle and I used to explore.

✓ It really helped to develop my confidence in riding a bicycle, and I used to explore.

'Riding on bicycle' is incorrect: use 'riding a bicycle'. Also tense consistency: context is past, so 'helps' should be 'helped'. 'Confidence regarding' is awkward; use 'confidence in'. Suggestion: Keep verbs in past when describing past habits and use correct noun number with articles.

× It really helps to develop my confidence regarding riding on bicycle and I used to explore.

✓ It really helped to develop my confidence in riding a bicycle, and I used to explore.

The speaker refers to past experiences, so present 'helps' should be past 'helped'. Also ensure 'used to' remains for habitual past actions. Suggestion: Maintain past tense throughout when describing past routines.

× It really helps to develop my confidence regarding riding on bicycle and I used to explore.

✓ It really helped to develop my confidence in riding a bicycle, and I used to explore.

Using 'regarding' and 'on' is unnatural here. Use 'confidence in riding' rather than 'confidence regarding riding on'. Suggestion: Use 'confidence in' + gerund phrase and 'ride a bicycle' structure.

× Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country due to the geography due to the critical like a off road route it it is one of the in adventurous route for those people who loves to ride whole part of Nepal.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because the geography includes many off-road routes; they are adventurous and attract people who love to ride throughout Nepal.

The original sentence is run-on and contains repeated words ('due to the', 'it it'), incorrect determiners ('a off road'), wrong verb forms ('loves'), and awkward phrases ('one of the in adventurous route'). Break into clearer clauses, use 'because' or 'due to' once, use 'off-road' as adjective, 'people who love' (plural verb), and 'throughout Nepal' for 'whole part of Nepal'. Suggestion: Simplify sentence structure, avoid repetition, and match subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country due to the geography due to the critical like a off road route it it is one of the in adventurous route for those people who loves to ride whole part of Nepal.

✓ Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because the geography includes many off-road routes; they are adventurous and attract people who love to ride throughout Nepal.

Phrases like 'critical like a off road route' and 'in adventurous route' misuse adjectives and articles. Use 'off-road routes' as the correct adjective+noun and 'adventurous' to describe routes. Also change 'loves' to 'love' for plural 'people'. Suggestion: Use adjectives directly before nouns and ensure plural agreement.