Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (tenses, pronouns, countable nouns) and avoid redundancy. For example, say whether you had a bike, how often you used it as a child, and why you prefer a motorcycle now. Use linking words like "but" and "so" correctly.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I didn’t ride it very often because my family usually used a motorcycle for daily travel since it was faster and more convenient. Nowadays I still ride a bike sometimes in the mornings for exercise because it’s good for my health.

제안: Answer directly then explain with specific reasons and examples. Improve grammar (use plural forms and correct articles) and choose natural vocabulary (e.g. "in general", "for exercise"). Use a linking word to connect your main idea and supporting detail.

예시: Not really. Motorcycles are far more common in my country because they are cheaper and more practical in traffic, while bicycles are mainly used for exercise or leisure. For example, many people cycle in parks or early in the morning to stay healthy.

× Yes I did have a bike when I was a child but I don't know often to use them.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't know how often to use it.

The student used 'did have' which is awkward; simple past 'had' is preferred. 'I don't know often to use them' mixes present and past and uses incorrect structure and plural 'them' for singular 'bike'. Change to past 'didn't know' to match time frame and use 'how often to use it' for correct question-word phrase and correct singular pronoun.

× I usually use motorcycle for everyday for my usually and because it's efficient and fast but I use bike for morning because is good for my health.

✓ I usually use a motorcycle every day because it's efficient and fast, but I ride my bike in the morning because it is good for my health.

Several issues: missing articles ('a motorcycle'), incorrect adverb phrase 'for everyday for my usually' should be 'every day' and simplified; pronoun/reference errors: 'I use bike' needs article and 'ride' is more natural; 'is good' lacks subject 'it'. Also 'my usually' is ungrammatical. Corrections fix article use, adverb placement, verb choice, and include subject for clarity.

× Not really, because in my country motorcycle is more used in general and bicycle is used just for health and for the bodies.

✓ Not really, because in my country motorcycles are used more in general, and bicycles are used mainly for health and exercise.

The student used singular nouns 'motorcycle' and 'bicycle' where plural forms are needed to speak generally. 'More used' is awkward; 'are used more' is correct. 'For the bodies' is unnatural; 'for health and exercise' conveys intended meaning. Also added 'mainly' for clarity.