Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.”), use past tense consistently, avoid hesitations and filler words, and add one short supporting detail (reason or memory). Keep answer to 1–3 sentences and use a linking word if you add a reason.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it wasn’t safe, so I mostly walked to school or used public transport.

제안: Work on repetition, sentence structure and specific supporting details. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because” or “for instance”). Use correct nouns and plural forms, and avoid repeating words. Mention concrete factors (e.g. affordability, traffic, or environment) to make the answer more informative.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for navigating heavy traffic. For example, many office workers and students use scooters and motorcycles to commute short distances quickly and cheaply.

× When I was a child, I have no bike because I I was. Yeah.

✓ When I was a child, I did not have a bike.

Tense error: the sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so the past simple should be used. 'Have' (present) is incorrect; use 'did not have'. Remove superfluous words ('I I was. Yeah') to make the sentence clear. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past situations and avoid filler words that confuse meaning.

× Yes, I think that bikes are popular in in my country because India is a diverse country.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are popular in my country because India is a diverse country.

There is a repeated word ('in in') creating a sentence structure error and redundancy. Remove the duplicate 'in' to correct the sentence. The rest is correct tense and structure: present simple is appropriate for general facts.

× There are many many type of bikes as well as vehicles are available because peoples are peoples are go their jobs in the bike.

✓ There are many types of bikes as well as other vehicles available because people go to their jobs by bike.

Multiple plural and article issues: 'type' should be plural 'types' after 'many'. 'Peoples' is incorrect for people (plural noun) unless referring to ethnic groups; use 'people'. Redundant duplication ('peoples are peoples are') must be removed. Use 'go to their jobs by bike' or 'use bikes to go to work' for natural phrasing. Also remove unnecessary 'are' after 'vehicles' and use 'other vehicles' for clarity.