Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is not coherent and does not directly respond to the question. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., bike color, how often you rode it, where you rode it). Keep your response natural, limit to about 2–4 short sentences, and use simple linking words like "and" or "because." Also avoid repeating words without meaning.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was sky blue and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon after school. I often went to the park with my friends, so I learned to ride confidently by the age of eight.

제안: The answer is mostly repetition and does not explain why bikes are or are not popular. Start with a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No/To some extent), then give 1–2 specific reasons or an example to support your view, using linking words like "because" or "for example." Keep it concise and avoid filler or apologies about language ability.

예시: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because public transport and cars are more commonly used. For example, most families own a car and cities are not very cycle-friendly, so few people commute by bicycle.

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✓ I had a red bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is unintelligible and lacks a clear subject-verb-object structure. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). To answer the question about having a bike as a child, use a simple past sentence with subject + past verb + object: 'I had a red bike.' Keep it concise and relevant to the question. Avoid repetition and unrelated words. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× No, no, no, no, no, no. Oh God, no. I know English, but I'm awkward. No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no. No.

✓ Not really. Bikes are not very popular in my country.

The original response is largely repetitions and does not answer the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because it fails to form a coherent response. To answer 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' use a concise opinion sentence in the present simple: 'Bikes are not very popular in my country.' This matches the present-tense general statement required by the question. If you want to add a personal comment, follow with a clear supporting sentence, e.g., 'Most people prefer cars or public transport.'