Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response does not answer the question and contains irrelevant repetition. For Part 1 you should give a clear, direct answer (topic sentence) and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words if you add details. For example, say whether you had a bike, describe it briefly, and give a reason or memory to make the answer informative.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents wanted me to be active, I practiced on it until I could ride without the training wheels, which felt like a big achievement.

제안: Your reply does not address the question. You should state your opinion clearly, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas and keep the answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, and many students ride to school to avoid traffic.

× Marsha. Hello. Hello, hello.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student's response does not form a complete answer to the examiner's question and consists only of interjections and a name. This is a sentence structure error (incomplete response / sentence without a verb). Provide a full sentence that answers the question; in this case the examiner asked about possession in the past, so use a past-tense negative or affirmative sentence such as 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' or 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Ensure the sentence includes a subject and a past-tense verb to be complete.

× Hello, hello, hello, hello.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply contains only repeated interjections and does not respond to the examiner's question, which is a sentence structure error (incomplete or missing response). The examiner asked about general popularity in the present, so use a full present-tense sentence such as 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or a negative/qualified response. Include a subject, verb, and object to make a grammatical sentence and fit the tense of the question.