Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (past tense forms and auxiliary use), reduce hesitations, and make structure clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct phrases: “I did not have,” “a three-wheeler” or “tricycle,” and use past simple consistently (e.g., “I used it most afternoons”). Practice smooth delivery to avoid fillers (“uh,” “umm”).

예시: No, I did not have a regular bicycle when I was a child, but I had a three-wheeler (a tricycle). I enjoyed riding it a lot, especially in the afternoons. For example, I used it most evenings after school until about five o’clock.

제안: Be specific and use clear time/age expressions; avoid numbers that look like time (9:00 to 23). Use linking words to expand (for example, because/also). Use correct passive or active forms: “They are considered” or “People often give bikes as gifts.” Give one concrete reason or example to support your opinion. Reduce hesitations and keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially among children and young people aged about 9 to 23. They are often given as gifts for finishing school or for special achievements. Also, many people use them for short trips and exercise, which helps explain their popularity.

× I, I did not had a bike when I was a child, but I had that kind which uh, called 3 Pike.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I had one that was called a tricycle.

The auxiliary did requires the base form of the main verb, so 'did not had' is incorrect; it should be 'did not have'. Also 'that kind which called 3 Pike' is unclear and ungrammatical; use 'one that was called a tricycle' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'did not + base verb' for simple past negatives and choose clear noun phrases.

× I enjoyed so much.

✓ I enjoyed it so much.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past tense and needs an object; 'so much' should modify the enjoyment and an object pronoun 'it' is required. Suggestion: include the object after 'enjoyed' (enjoyed it so much) or rephrase to 'I enjoyed that a lot.'

× I use it uh, most of that time and evening when it starts 5.

✓ I used it most of the time in the evenings when it got to five.

Speaker is describing past habitual action, so past tense 'used' and 'got' (or 'reached') are appropriate instead of present 'use' and present simple phrasing. 'Most of that time and evening' is unidiomatic; use 'most of the time in the evenings.' Suggestion: maintain past tense for past habits (used, would, or used to).

× Yes I do, it is so popular especially around uh ages between 9:00 to 23 maybe umm.

✓ Yes, I do. They are very popular, especially among people aged between nine and twenty-three.

The question asks about bikes generally, so plural subject 'they' fits better than 'it'. Also 'ages between 9:00 to 23' mixes time and age; use 'aged between nine and twenty-three'. Maintain present tense 'are' for general truths. Suggestion: use plural pronouns for general categories and write age ranges in words or numerals consistently.

× It also considered for children as a gift after umm done with school or achieving.

✓ They are also considered gifts for children after they finish school or achieve something.

The passive construction 'It also considered' is missing the auxiliary 'is' or 'are' and uses incorrect preposition/order. Use 'considered gifts for children' and complete clauses 'after they finish school or achieve something.' Suggestion: include proper auxiliary verbs in passive voice and use 'finish' for completing school; clarify 'achieve something' (e.g., 'achieve good grades').