Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct basic idea but fix grammar, vocabulary and redundancy. Use the correct noun (bike), correct past tense for 'was', and avoid repeating the same phrase. Begin with a clear topic sentence and then add one specific supporting detail (e.g., who gave it to you or how you used it). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences and use a linking word if you add a detail (e.g., 'and' or 'so').

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and my parents bought it for my seventh birthday. I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood, so it helped me become more independent.

제안: Good structure and relevant points, but refine grammar, coherence and clarity. Use correct subject-verb agreement ('they are'), avoid awkward phrasing like 'stressing not a far away', and use clearer linking words (e.g., 'on one hand... on the other hand...'). Provide one specific example or statistic to make the answer more concrete. Limit to 2–3 sentences maximum to be concise.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. On one hand, many people cycle for exercise and leisure, and on the other hand, bikes are a common form of short-distance transport—for example, students often ride to school instead of taking a bus.

× Yes, I did. I had a bark when I were a child. When I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used incorrect past forms and a wrong word. 'Were' is incorrect for the singular first person in simple past; the correct form is 'was'. Also 'bark' appears to be a typo for 'bike'. Use 'was' with singular subjects in past tense and correct the noun to 'bike'. Suggestion: replace 'bark' with 'bike' and use 'was' instead of 'were' (I was a child).

× In my opinion, bikes are really popular in my country because on the one hand it's a way of spending your free time and exercising, on the other hand it's a way of transportation and getting to a certain destination, stressing not a far away 1.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are really popular in my country because, on the one hand, they're a way to spend your free time and exercise; on the other hand, they're a means of transportation for getting to a certain destination, especially one not far away.

Multiple issues: prepositional and phrasing problems. Use 'a way to spend' rather than 'a way of spending' for natural phrasing and 'exercise' (parallel form). 'Way of transportation' is awkward; 'means of transportation' is correct. 'Getting to a certain destination' needs the preposition 'for' or rephrasing; 'especially' fits 'stressing' which is incorrect here. 'Not a far away' is incorrect adjective order and article; use 'not far away' or 'one not far away'. Suggestion: use 'a way to spend... and exercise', 'means of transportation', and 'especially one not far away' for clarity and correct prepositions.