Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and naturalness. Use past tense correctly and give a brief additional detail (reason or memory) using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail introduced by 'because' or 'so'.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a small apartment and there wasn't enough space to store one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike to ride around the park on weekends.

제안: Correct sentence structure, remove filler errors, and use linking words to connect ideas. Provide a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details (e.g., reasons, examples) with connectors like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid abbreviations and fragmented sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many cities have dedicated cycle lanes and public bike-sharing programs, so people often choose bikes for commuting and running errands.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple for past time expressions (I didn't have...).

× Yes, many people in my country use a a bike as a transportation and also our Rd. is. Good for a bike.

✓ Yes, many people in my country use bikes for transportation, and our roads are good for cycling.

Multiple issues: duplicate article 'a a' and wrong singular 'a bike' after 'many people' (singular/plural issue: use plural 'bikes'). 'As a transportation' is incorrect; 'transportation' is an uncountable noun used with 'for' not 'as a'. Abbreviated 'Rd.' and fragmented 'is. Good' cause sentence structure errors; use 'roads are good for cycling' for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'many people', use 'for transportation', avoid abbreviations, and ensure complete clause with correct verb form.