Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, more specific response with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use a linking word when adding details. Avoid a one-sentence answer and add personal specifics (type of bike, where you rode it, who taught you).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode a small red bicycle with training wheels, and my father taught me to cycle in the neighborhood park. Because I practiced every weekend, I became confident and started joining friends for short rides.

제안: Correct basic grammar and pronunciation errors, and expand with specific reasons and examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 supporting reasons using linking words (for example, because, and, so). Also replace the incorrect word 'bag' with 'bikes'.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and workers use bicycles to commute to school or local markets, and cities have started adding bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Yes, the bag are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The student used 'bag' (singular) while meaning the plural noun 'bikes' to match the question about bikes; additionally the determiner 'the' is unnecessary unless referring to a specific set. This is a singular/plural mismatch. Suggestion: use the plural noun that agrees with 'are' (e.g., 'bikes are popular') or say 'the bike is popular' if referring to a specific bike.