Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và trả lời bằng một câu hỏi khác; cần chú ý lắng nghe và trả lời trực tiếp. Khi không nghe rõ, hãy yêu cầu người hỏi nhắc lại thay vì tự đổi chủ đề. Ngoài ra, trả lời cần có câu chủ đề trực tiếp và tối đa 5 câu, dùng liên từ nếu cần mở rộng.

예시: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. It was bright red and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. I often rode to my friend’s house every weekend, which helped me gain confidence and balance. If I didn’t hear a question clearly, I would say, ‘Sorry, could you repeat that please?’ before answering.

제안: Câu trả lời ngắn, lộn xộn và có lỗi ngữ pháp cùng từ thiếu chính xác ('back' sai từ, nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng). Cần trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sử dụng chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: đối tượng, mục đích, tỷ lệ) và nối các ý bằng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng bằng cách luyện trả lời trước những câu thông dụng.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many students and workers use them for short trips because they are cheap and convenient. For example, in my city, it’s common to see students cycling to school and adults riding to local markets. Moreover, bike-sharing programs have increased their use recently.

× Did you have a bag when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question but with a different noun, causing a sentence structure and relevance error. The examiner asked about a bike; the student should answer affirmatively or negatively and use past simple to match 'Did you have'. Use 'had' for past possession. Suggestion: Answer directly using past simple: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because Chinese students have a back to umm go to school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because Chinese students use them to go to school.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'have a back' is incorrect collocation and unclear; 'to go to school' requires a verb indicating means ('use them'). Replace 'have a back' with 'use them' or 'ride them'. Also remove filler 'umm' in formal answer. The tense and meaning are present simple (a general fact), so keep present simple: 'use'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because Chinese students use them to go to school.'