Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Grammar and accuracy: correct the verb agreement and article use ("when I was a child"). Make the answer slightly longer (1–3 short sentences) with a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word if adding a detail. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon.

제안: Fluency and accuracy: avoid hesitations ("uh") and non-standard verbs (use "built" not "builded"). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Be concise and natural. Mention specific facts or examples to support your opinion. Limit to up to 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, the government has built many cycling paths and parks in recent years, so more people cycle for exercise and commuting.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The verb 'be' in past tense for first person singular is 'was', not 'were'. 'Were' is used for plural subjects or in subjunctive contexts. Use 'was' to match the singular subject 'I'. Suggestion: memorize past forms of 'be' (I/he/she/it was; you/we/they were).

× It was because government builded a lot of parks from past for cycling.

✓ It was because the government built a lot of parks in the past for cycling.

Two errors: 'builded' is incorrect; the past tense of 'build' is 'built' (past participle and past simple). Also, definite article 'the' is needed before 'government' and the phrase 'from past' is ungrammatical; use 'in the past'. Suggestion: use 'built' for past of 'build', include 'the' before nouns like 'government' when referring to a specific institution, and use the time expression 'in the past'.