Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail with a linking word. Correct past-tense forms and word order (e.g., “My father gave me a bike for my fifth birthday”). Avoid vague phrases like “it can felt for.”

예시: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bright red bike for my fifth birthday, and I remember learning to ride it in our backyard. It was memorable because I felt very proud when I finally managed to cycle without help.

제안: Make your response clearer and more specific. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with one or two concrete reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example”). Use correct subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing (e.g., “many young people ride bikes,” “bikes are a convenient way to get around”). Avoid repetition and unfinished clauses.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. For example, many young people ride bikes to school and to visit friends because they are cheap and convenient in busy cities.

× That bike gave from my father my 5th birthday.

✓ That bike was given to me by my father for my 5th birthday.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb form and word order. Use passive voice with the past simple 'was given' because the action happened in the past and the receiver is the subject. Include the preposition 'to' with 'give' when indicating the recipient and use 'for' to indicate occasion. Also place time expression 'for my 5th birthday' at the end for natural order.

× It was rememberable for me and it can felt for.

✓ It was memorable to me and I still remember it.

'Rememberable' is a nonstandard form; the correct adjective is 'memorable'. The clause 'it can felt for' is ungrammatical: 'felt' is past tense and 'can' requires a base verb. To express continuing memory, use 'I still remember it' or 'it remains memorable to me.' Also use 'to me' rather than 'for me' to express personal impression.

× Every young people have to bike for riding and convenient any kind of place visiting.

✓ Every young person has to ride a bike to visit different places conveniently.

'Every' should be followed by a singular noun: 'every young person' (not 'people'). This requires singular verb agreement: 'has' instead of 'have'. 'Bike for riding' is redundant; use 'ride a bike'. 'Convenient any kind of place visiting' is incorrect order and word choice: use 'to visit different places conveniently.' Rearranging improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And then today I have a students essential for bike is very convenient and very.

✓ Nowadays, students find bikes essential because they are very convenient.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: wrong tense phrasing 'And then today', incorrect article and number 'a students', and incomplete comparative phrase 'very convenient and very.' A clear, grammatical sentence is 'Nowadays, students find bikes essential because they are very convenient.' This uses present simple for general truth, correct plural 'students' with verb 'find', and completes the reason clause.