Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), reduce redundancy, and structure the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so') correctly and give a specific reason or short example. Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes. I got my first bike when I was nine because my father gave it to me as a birthday present. I remember being very happy because I used to ride it every afternoon with my friends, and it quickly became a daily habit.

제안: Correct grammar (use plural nouns and articles), improve vocabulary choice ('teens' instead of 'kid of adolescence'), and make the reason specific. Use a linking phrase such as 'because' or 'for example' and keep the answer concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many teenagers enjoy cycling for exercise and fun. For example, you can often see groups of students riding bikes in parks or commuting to school.

× Yes, I have when I was nine years old because my father want to give me a present for my birthday.

✓ Yes, I did when I was nine years old because my father wanted to give me a present for my birthday.

The student mixed present perfect 'have' with a specific past time 'when I was nine years old' which requires simple past 'did'. Also the verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match the time frame. Use consistent past tense for actions that happened at a specific time in the past.

× So I was very happy when I received the bike because I very like to buy and I was seeing it to be my habit.

✓ So I was very happy when I received the bike because I really liked it and I saw it as a new hobby.

Several tense and word choice problems: 'very like to buy' is incorrect—use 'liked' to express past preference for the bike; 'really' is the correct adverb. 'I was seeing it to be my habit' is ungrammatical; use 'I saw it as a new hobby' or 'I developed a habit' to express that meaning. Maintain past tense to match 'was' and 'received'.

× Yeah, I think bike is a popular in my country because now have many kid of adolescence is very like want to have a bite and seen it as as a habit so from the bite you.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because nowadays many children and teenagers like to have a bike and see it as a habit.

Multiple issues: 'bike is a popular' has number and article errors—use plural 'bikes are popular'. 'now have many kid of adolescence' is ungrammatical; use 'nowadays many children and teenagers' for clarity. 'is very like want to have a bite' should be 'like to have a bike' (correct verb and noun) and 'seen it as as a habit' should be 'see it as a habit' (present tense to express general truth). Keep present simple for general statements. Correct spelling 'bike' not 'bite' and remove duplicate 'as'.