Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is short and grammatically correct but too brief. According to the Basic Structure rule, give a direct topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, say why you didn't have a bike, where you lived, or what you used instead. Keep it natural, avoid redundancy, and stay within five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't. I grew up in a small apartment building where there wasn't space to store a bicycle, so my parents preferred me to use public transport. Also, my family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school instead.

제안: The answer is unclear and off-topic, with grammatical mistakes and irrelevant vocabulary ("yaks"). To improve, respond directly to the question with a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use relevant vocabulary (bikes, commuting, traffic, environment) and correct grammar. Keep response concise (1–3 supporting sentences).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. For example, many people cycle to work because it's faster during rush hour and it's cheaper than driving. In addition, cycling is promoted as an environmentally friendly option by local authorities.

× Yaks aren't thin because it is easy to easy to write and you can go anywhere without waiting traffic.

✓ Bikes aren't expensive because they are easy to ride and you can go anywhere without waiting in traffic.

The original sentence contains several problems. The speaker used 'Yaks' instead of 'bikes' (wrong word choice, treated here as a pronoun/noun misuse) and 'it' which does not clearly refer to a plural subject; this is an incorrect use of pronouns and noun choice. There is also a repeated phrase 'easy to easy to write' which is incorrect and likely intended to be 'easy to ride.' 'Waiting traffic' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'waiting in traffic.' The corrected sentence uses 'they' to agree with the plural noun 'bikes,' replaces the incorrect words, fixes the repeated fragment, and adds the preposition 'in' for natural English. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their nouns (use 'they' for plural 'bikes'), avoid accidental word repetition, and use standard collocations like 'ride a bike' and 'waiting in traffic.'