Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が短く不自然です。過去のことを尋ねられているので、過去形で答え、理由や具体的なエピソードを加えてください。回答は主題文＋具体例で構成し、接続語（for example, because, so）を使って論理的に展開しましょう。自然な表現を使い、同じフレーズを繰り返さないように注意してください。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I rode it to school and around my neighborhood almost every day. For example, I remember practicing wheelies with my friends on weekends, which helped me become confident riding on busy streets later.

제안: 回答が短く曖昧で、数字や非自然な表現が混ざっています。一般的な見解を述べた後、具体的な理由や比較を加えて説得力を出しましょう。接続語（because, therefore, however）や具体例（都市部と地方の違い、目的別の利用など）を使うと良いです。また、文法的に単数・複数や時制に注意してください。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Because bicycles are cheap and convenient, many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, in my city there are many bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so more students and office workers choose to cycle rather than drive.

× Yes, I do. Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using 'do' is present tense and mismatches the time frame. Change to 'did' to match the past reference. Also repeating the phrase is unnecessary; a single past-tense short answer is natural. Suggestion: Answer brief past-tense: 'Yes, I did.' or 'Yes, I had a bike.'

× My old friends have a bike.

✓ My old friends had bikes.

The sentence mixes plural subject 'friends' with singular object 'a bike', which is inconsistent. Additionally, the context is past ('when you were a child' / 'Do you think bikes are popular?'), so past tense 'had' is appropriate. Use plural 'bikes' to match 'friends' or use singular with 'a friend' if referring to one person. Suggestion: Use 'My old friends had bikes.' or 'An old friend had a bike.'