Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct answer (yes/no or short statement) followed by one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, use linking words if you add details, and avoid repeating the question. Aim for 2–4 sentences and include a specific detail (age, who gave it, how often you rode).

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents, and I rode it every day after school to visit my friends. Because our neighborhood was safe and quiet, I quickly became confident cycling on the streets.

제안: You repeated and slightly misheard the question, producing an incorrect phrasing. First, restate the correct question in your mind, then answer directly. Provide a clear opinion (yes/no/partly) and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, therefore, because) and keep responses to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities and among students because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many university campuses encourage cycling by providing bike racks and dedicated lanes, so a lot of young people choose bikes for short trips.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question as a question, causing a sentence structure error (question form used instead of a statement). The response should be a past tense statement answering the question. Use the past simple declarative: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are people in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used 'people' instead of 'popular', which makes the sentence semantically and structurally incorrect. This is a word choice error that breaks sentence meaning. Replace 'people' with the adjective 'popular' to match the intended question about prevalence: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'