Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Используйте правильные времена и более естественную структуру. Начните с прямого ответа в прошедшем времени, затем добавьте одно-два предложения с причинами или чувствами. Избегайте лишних слов и ошибок в согласовании (например, "didn't have" вместо "don't have"). Также поправьте структуру «It seems like…» и используйте конкретные детали.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I used to dream about having one because I admired older kids riding around the neighborhood. Sometimes I would try to ride my friend's bike, which made me wish for my own even more.

제안: Сформулируйте предложение более ясно и плавно, исправив грамматику и согласование глаголов. Начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину с использованием связующих слов (for example, because, so). Дайте конкретный пример вместо расплывчатой фразы «go back so popular».

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many parents buy bikes for their children so they can ride together as a family, which encourages regular exercise. As a result, more people spend time outdoors and this helps improve overall health.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I dreamed about it very much.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I dreamed about it very much.

The sentence mixes present simple 'don't have' with past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or states that occurred in the past (didn't have).

× It's seems like to be my dream back to childhood.

✓ It seems to have been my dream during my childhood.

The original has an extra 'It's' and incorrect verb form 'seems like to be'. Use 'seems to have been' to indicate that something appeared to be a past-state, and 'during my childhood' is a natural time phrase. Suggestion: remove redundant 'it is' and use correct infinitive/perfect infinitive form to match past reference.

× Yeah, I think go back so popular in my country because parents often buy their children bicycles for shared bike rides.

✓ Yeah, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because parents often buy their children bikes for shared bike rides.

The original sentence uses 'go back' incorrectly and has awkward structure. The intended subject is 'bicycles', so use 'bicycles are very popular'. Also replace 'buy their children bicycles' with 'buy their children bikes' or 'buy bicycles for their children' for natural word order. Suggestion: identify the main subject and verb, and order words as subject + verb + complement.

× This introduces people to physical activity from an early age and make them get out into the fresh air more often, which in turn leads to good health.

✓ This introduces people to physical activity from an early age and makes them get out into the fresh air more often, which in turn leads to good health.

Compound predicates connected by 'and' share the same subject 'This'. The verbs must agree in number: 'introduces' (singular) so the second verb should be 'makes' not 'make'. Also 'make them get out' is awkward; 'makes them get out' is acceptable but consider 'encourages them to go out' for smoother style. Suggestion: ensure verbs in compound predicates agree with the subject and choose natural collocations.