Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear, relevant and mostly natural. To improve, make the topic sentence more concise, correct minor grammar (use "rode" not "rolled", add possessive apostrophe in "grandparents' house"), and add one specific detail (e.g., age when you learned or a memorable moment) using a linking phrase to enrich the response without exceeding sentence limits.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in my grandparents' big yard because I learned to cycle there at about seven, and I especially remember racing my cousin around the apple trees which made me feel free and confident.

제안: Good content and clear reasons. Improve by fixing small grammar issues ("a lot of people"), adding one linking word for coherence (e.g., "however" or "for example"), and giving a specific example or brief comparison to show depth (e.g., mention city vs rural usage or an approximate statistic). Keep it to at most five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students and delivery workers prefer bicycles because they are cheap, convenient and better for health, although scooters remain common in crowded cities.

× I usually rolled it at my grandparents house because they had a big yard where I could practice and I love feeling free while cycling around.

✓ I usually rode it at my grandparents' house because they had a big yard where I could practice, and I loved feeling free while cycling around.

'Rolled' is not the correct verb for riding a bike; use 'rode' (past of 'ride'). 'Grandparents house' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'grandparents\''. The sentence mixes past and present: the context is about childhood, so verbs should be past tense ('loved' rather than 'love'). Add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: keep all verbs in the past when describing past habits and use correct past forms of verbs.

× Although many people ride scooters, lot of people, especially students and delivery workers, use bicycles because they are cheap, convenient and good for health.

✓ Although many people ride scooters, a lot of people, especially students and delivery workers, use bicycles because they are cheap, convenient, and good for health.

'Lot of people' is missing the determiner 'a' and should be 'a lot of people'. Also add a comma before the final item in the list (Oxford comma optional) and include 'a' before 'lot' to be grammatically correct. Consider 'good for health' is acceptable but more natural is 'good for your health' or 'good for health' depending on formality; here 'good for your health' would be clearer.