Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and a clearer topic sentence; keep it concise and natural. Start with a simple past tense statement, then add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Avoid mixing present and past tenses and unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a birthday present when I was seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighbourhood with my friends.

제안: Make the statement more natural and grammatical, use plural forms and clearer reasons, and add a linking word for coherence. Offer one or two specific reasons or examples rather than vague phrases.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many families use them for recreation. For example, children often ride bikes in parks on weekends with their parents, and there are community cycling events that encourage families to join.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense for past events: 'I had a bike.'

× It was given by my dad when I was seven years old as a birthday present.

✓ It was given to me by my dad when I was seven years old as a birthday present.

The passive form 'was given' is correct, but the indirect object is missing the preposition 'to' before 'me'. Use 'given to me' to indicate the recipient. Suggestion: Include the recipient with 'to' in passive constructions: 'It was given to me by my dad.'

× Yes, bike is so popular in our country because this is the one that children loves to play, especially during weekends in the park together with their parents and they have the bandings.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because they are something that children love to play with, especially on weekends in the park with their parents, and they have the brandings.

Multiple issues corrected while staying within allowed types: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match general statement; subject-verb agreement 'is' -> 'are'; 'children loves' is wrong: 'children' plural with verb 'love'; missing preposition 'with' after 'play'; 'during weekends' -> 'on weekends' is standard; 'bandings' is likely incorrect word; 'brandings' or 'badges' may be intended. Suggestions: Use plural for general statements about countable nouns, match verb number to subject, include correct prepositions ('play with', 'on weekends'), and choose correct noun for 'brandings' if you mean markings or decorations.