Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and clear, which is good. To improve, add one brief supporting detail (reason or contrast) using a linking word to make it more natural and informative. Keep it within 1–3 sentences total and avoid redundancy.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very small apartment and there was no safe place to store one. However, I often borrowed my neighbor's bike on weekends to ride in the park.

제안: Your main idea is relevant, but the answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, state your topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples with linking words (e.g., because, so, therefore). Also correct grammar (avoid repeating phrases and fix word order). Keep the response concise and coherent.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars, so they rely on bicycles for daily transport. For example, commuters in cities often use bikes to travel short distances and avoid traffic congestion.

× Yes, bikes are widely used in our country because of poverty in a country, many people are not able to afford cars, so they. You so they use bikes for transportation.

✓ Yes, bikes are widely used in our country because of poverty; many people are not able to afford cars, so they use bikes for transportation.

The sentence has multiple issues but per the allowed list we address preposition and related repetition errors. 'in a country' is incorrect; use 'in our country' or omit 'a'. Also the clause punctuation is incorrect and there is an unnecessary isolated fragment 'You so they'. Correction joins clauses with a semicolon and removes the fragment. Suggestion: use 'in our country' or 'in the country' when referring to a specific country, avoid repeating subject phrases, and ensure clauses are connected properly.