Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Begin with a simple topic sentence that answers the question (e.g. “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t”), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep sentences natural and relevant. Avoid unrelated phrases and ensure correct grammar and vocabulary (for example, use “I loved playing” instead of “Play definitely love”).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride around the neighborhood every afternoon. Because my house was near a park, I often rode there with my friends, and we would practice tricks and races.

제안: Your answer is relevant but wordy and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words like “because” and “for example.” Use concise phrasing and correct verb forms (e.g. “people use bikes” not “people are usually to use”).

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students ride to school and office workers use bicycles to avoid traffic, and some people also use them for exercise or running small errands.

× Play definitely love in my childhood. Heart and heart attack.

✓ I definitely loved playing when I was a child.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb, and words are in the wrong order and form ('Play' should be the gerund or infinitive with subject and past tense verb). 'Heart and heart attack' is unrelated and unclear; likely accidental. Use 'I definitely loved playing when I was a child' to convey the meaning. Suggestion: include explicit subject 'I', past tense 'loved' for a past habit, and the gerund 'playing' as the object. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country because due to this the people are easily moved from one place to another and people are usually to use their bikes for their office purpose and to go for their schools as well as to those some extracurricular activities.

✓ Yes, definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country because they help people move easily from one place to another, and people usually use their bikes to go to work, to school, and to attend extracurricular activities.

The original sentence has multiple grammar issues: incorrect phrase 'because due to this' (redundant), passive construction 'are easily moved' which is unnatural here, incorrect infinitive pattern 'are usually to use', wrong article and word order 'for their office purpose' and 'to go for their schools' and 'to those some extracurricular activities'. Corrections: remove redundancy by using 'because they help', use active verb 'help people move' instead of passive, use correct verb pattern 'people usually use their bikes', and standard prepositions 'to go to work', 'to school', 'to attend extracurricular activities'. This fits present simple tense describing general facts. Grammar problem type ID:5