Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question with a topic sentence and a supporting detail. To improve further, make the response slightly more natural and varied by adding one specific detail (e.g., what the bike looked like, how old you were, or a memory) and use a linking word if you add more than one sentence. Keep responses concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around the park every weekend.

제안: Your answer shows the idea but has several grammar and clarity problems. To improve: 1) Start with a clear topic sentence: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular.' 2) Give one specific reason and a brief example, using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') correctly. 3) Correct grammar: use 'are popular', 'because', and 'people/people like to cycle' or 'many people enjoy biking'. Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, commuters often ride bikes to work in the city, especially during warm weather.

× Yeah, but I think by is pop are popular in my country is because.

✓ Yeah, but I think bikes are popular in my country because...

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains extra, misplaced words ('by is pop are') causing a sentence structure error. Rearranging to 'I think bikes are popular in my country because' restores a correct subject-verb order and clear meaning. Suggestion: state the subject 'bikes', use the correct plural verb 'are', and place the reason clause after 'because'. Additionally, ensure spoken filler 'yeah' is followed by a complete clause and remove redundant or misordered words.

× Because everyone like to bike.

✓ Because everyone likes to bike.

This sentence uses the base form 'like' with the singular indefinite pronoun 'everyone'. 'Everyone' is grammatically singular and requires the third person singular verb form 'likes'. Also, when expressing habitual actions, the infinitive 'to bike' is acceptable, but using the gerund 'biking' is also natural: 'Because everyone likes biking.' Suggestion: use 'likes' to agree with 'everyone' or rephrase with a plural subject (e.g., 'All people like to bike') if you want the base verb form.