Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence (Yes/No). Use correct tense and word choice, avoid repetition, and keep response to three sentences. Add one specific supporting detail (reason or example) using a linking word (e.g., because or however).

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I always wanted to learn because my friends rode bikes to school and it looked fun. In the future, I plan to buy a bike so I can exercise and explore my neighborhood.

제안: Answer directly and clarify your point: state whether bikes are popular or not, then explain with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, however) and correct vocabulary (e.g., "tuk-tuks" or "motorbikes"). Keep to two or three clear sentences.

예시: Bikes are not very popular in Somalia. Instead, many people use tuk-tuks or motorbikes because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, I take a tuk-tuk to college every day because it is cheap and quick.

× On my childhood, actually, I don't hide a bike.

✓ In my childhood, actually, I didn't have a bike.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; use 'in my childhood'. Also verb tense and lexical choice are wrong: 'don't hide a bike' is ungrammatical—meaning likely 'didn't have a bike' (past possession). Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time frame.

× And then is, is still, I never ride a bike, but it's a one of my life, one of life experience that I wanna do.

✓ I never rode a bike, but it is one of the life experiences I want to have.

This sentence has multiple structure and tense issues. Use past simple 'rode' to describe past experience. 'it's a one of my life' is ungrammatical; correct to 'it is one of the life experiences'. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. Remove disfluent 'and then is, is still' as it adds no meaning.

× And in the future I'd like to buy a bike and ride it.

✓ In the future, I'd like to buy a bike and ride it.

This sentence is largely correct grammatically; only punctuation and word order improved by adding a comma after the introductory phrase. The contracted 'I'd like' correctly expresses a future desire.

× When it comes to Somalia buy kids are not popular but take tuk tuku which I like daily for my school in college.

✓ When it comes to Somalia, bicycles are not popular among kids; instead, they take tuk-tuks, which I take daily to school and college.

Multiple problems: 'buy kids are not popular' is nonsensical—likely meant 'bikes/bicycles are not popular among kids'. Use plural 'bicycles are' and correct preposition 'among'. 'Take tuk tuku' should be 'they take tuk-tuks'. Also clarify 'which I like daily for my school in college' to 'which I take daily to school and college'. This fixes noun choice, plurality, prepositions, and verb usage.