Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar, article use, and sentence completeness. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 linked supporting details (use linking words like “and,” “which,” or “so”) and finish the thought. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and correct small errors: use “a bicycle,” “in the afternoons,” and complete your final clause (e.g., “until I could ride without help”).

예시: Yes—I had a bicycle as a child, a small red one with training wheels that my parents bought for my seventh birthday. I rode it in the afternoons around the neighborhood, which helped me gain confidence and learn balance. After a few weeks of practice, I could ride without training wheels and felt very proud.

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct and provide specific reasons with linking words. Begin with a direct statement, then give 2 specific, distinct reasons using connectors like “because,” “so,” or “for example.” Avoid vague phrases and check verb agreement and articles (e.g., “they consume less fuel,” “people who work for daily wages”).

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they consume less fuel and are cheaper to maintain. In addition, they are useful for daily commuting and for workers who earn daily wages, since bikes reduce transport costs and are easy to park in crowded areas.

× Yes, I had bicycle when I was a child, a small red one with training wheels that my parents bought for my 7th birthday.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child, a small red one with training wheels that my parents bought for my 7th birthday.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before countable singular noun 'bicycle'. Use 'a' with singular, countable, nonspecific nouns: 'a bicycle'. Improve by remembering that singular countable nouns require an article or determiner.

× I spent countless afternoon rides it around the neighborhood which helped me gain confidence and learn balance.

✓ I spent countless afternoons riding it around the neighborhood, which helped me gain confidence and learn balance.

Multiple issues: 'afternoon rides' should be plural noun 'afternoons' when used with 'countless'; the verb phrase 'spent ... riding' is the correct pattern ('spend' + time + -ing), not 'spent ... rides it'. Also need 'riding it' to show action and a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which helped...'. Improve by using 'spent countless afternoons riding it'.

× For example, I remember practicing until.

✓ For example, I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.

The original sentence is incomplete: 'until' requires a clause indicating the endpoint. Provide the missing clause to complete the meaning. Suggest adding a clear result or time, e.g., 'until I could ride without training wheels'.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it consume a less fuel and it can be useful for everyday life and it is helpful for the people who are employed for their daily wages.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they consume less fuel, they are useful for everyday life, and they are helpful for people who are paid daily wages.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'bikes' is plural so use 'they' not 'it'; verb 'consume' should agree with plural subject, so 'consume' is correct with 'they' (original had 'consume' but preceded by 'it' causing mismatch). 'a less fuel' is ungrammatical; use 'less fuel' for uncountable noun. Repeated 'it' is awkward; better to use 'they' consistently and parallel structure: 'they consume less fuel, they are useful..., and they are helpful...'. Also 'people who are employed for their daily wages' is awkward; use 'people who are paid daily wages' or 'daily wage workers'.