Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and unclear. The examiner's question asks about past possession, so give a direct topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because/so) and specific information (age, who gave it, how often you used it). Avoid single-word or irrelevant replies.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it almost every day to ride around the neighborhood. Because my friends also had bikes, we often raced together after school, which helped me gain confidence and balance.

제안: Your reply is unrelated and not an answer. To score well, respond directly with an opinion, then support it with reasons and a specific example. Use linking words (for instance, however, because) and keep the answer within about 3–5 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use bicycles to commute to university or to buy groceries, and several cities have built dedicated bike lanes to encourage cycling.

× Chang.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student response 'Chang.' is not a valid sentence and does not answer the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?', which requires a past-tense response. A correct short answer is 'Yes, I did.' or a full response 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: provide a complete clause with subject and verb in the past tense to clearly answer the question.

× Call Dad.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student response 'Call Dad.' is unrelated and not a grammatically correct answer to the question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the reply lacks relevance and a proper clause addressing the question. The correct response should express opinion in the present tense, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think they are very popular.' Suggestion: answer using a subject and a verb that state an opinion and match the present-tense question.