Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary, reduce hesitations, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Use linking words and avoid repetitions. Also correct unclear word 'shadows' to intended word (e.g., 'sweatshirts' or 'shorts').

예시: I like wearing comfortable clothes such as loose T‑shirts and baggy jeans. For example, loose clothes make it easier to move and stay cool when I exercise, so I usually choose them for everyday wear.

제안: Make a concise direct statement, smooth linking to reasons, and correct grammar (e.g., subject–verb agreement). Avoid filler words. Provide one clear reason and an example.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they can be worn anytime and are more practical for daily activities. For instance, I often wear casual outfits when I go shopping or meet friends because they are more comfortable.

제안: Answer directly and avoid contradicting statements (student said not really but then says T-shirts are good for formal meetings which is odd). Use correct tense and specific reasons—mention fabric, fit, or weather. Limit to two supporting sentences and use linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

예시: I don't usually prefer T‑shirts for long periods because they can cling to the skin and feel uncomfortable in hot weather. However, I sometimes wear a high‑quality cotton T‑shirt for casual outings because it is breathable.

제안: Give a direct response (Yes/No) then explain briefly with a specific routine or habit. Remove hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., 'I don't' instead of 'did I didn't'). Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick comfortable items like baggy shirts and loose pants. Therefore, I can quickly get dressed and wear the same style for different occasions.

제안: State clearly whether there is a difference, then give a specific example of what you wear and why. Correct grammar (subject–verb agreement, tense) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because'.

예시: There isn't much difference between my weekday and weekend clothes because I usually wear a simple shirt and pants every day. Because I value comfort, I stick to the same style whether I'm working or relaxing.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating the preferred colours, then support with two specific reasons (matching and comfort in hot weather). Improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'light-coloured clothes', 'they feel cooler').

예시: I prefer light‑coloured clothes because they are easy to match with different accessories and feel cooler in hot weather. For example, I often choose white or beige shirts in summer to stay comfortable and stylish.

× I think I definitely like comfortable clothes, shadows, baggy jeans or shirt.

✓ I definitely like comfortable clothes, such as sweats, baggy jeans, or shirts.

Multiple errors: word choice and pluralization. 'shadows' is likely wrong; use 'sweats' or 'sweatshirts'. 'baggy jeans or shirt' should be parallel and plural: 'baggy jeans or shirts'. This fixes article and noun forms and makes the list parallel.

× Uh, it's very common in daily basis and it's really helped me to exercise without feeling hot or com uncomfortable.

✓ They are very common in daily life and they really help me exercise without feeling hot or uncomfortable.

Present tense and word choice errors. Use plural 'they' to match plural 'clothes' and present simple 'help' for habitual action. 'in daily basis' is incorrect; use 'in daily life' or 'on a daily basis'. 'com uncomfortable' is a typo; use 'uncomfortable'.

× I prefer comfortable and casual clothes umm to smart clothes because it's uh uh of can be worn anytime and everywhere, especially in daily day uh.

✓ I prefer comfortable and casual clothes to smart clothes because they can be worn anytime and anywhere, especially every day.

Subject-verb and pronoun issues plus word choice. 'it's of can be worn' is incorrect; use 'they can be worn' to refer to clothes (plural). 'anywhere' not 'everywhere' is fine both ways; 'in daily day' is incorrect—use 'every day' or 'on a daily basis'.

× Meanwhile, smart clothes often worn on special occasions only.

✓ Meanwhile, smart clothes are often worn only on special occasions.

Missing auxiliary verb for passive construction. Add 'are' for correct passive voice and place 'only' before 'on special occasions' for natural word order.

× Oh, not really. I mean, it is very good for formal meetings or special occasions.

✓ Oh, not really. I mean, T-shirts are not very good for formal meetings or special occasions.

Pronoun reference and meaning: 'it' is vague; specify 'T-shirts'. Also the original 'it is very good' contradicts context; likely intended that T-shirts are not appropriate for formal meetings, so correct to 'are not very good'.

× However, it wasn't so comfortable when being worn for a long time.

✓ However, they are not very comfortable when worn for a long time.

Tense and agreement: general statement should be present simple 'are not' rather than past 'wasn't'. Use plural 'they' to agree with 'T-shirts' and remove unnecessary 'being'—'when worn' is concise.

× Uh, especially in hard days.

✓ Especially on hot days.

Word choice error: 'hard days' is unclear; context implies hot weather, so use 'hot days'. Preposition 'on' is used with days.

× It just stick to your skin and it's very, uh, very uncomfortable at the same time.

✓ They just stick to your skin and are very uncomfortable.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it just stick' is wrong for plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'they stick' and 'are very uncomfortable'. Also simplify redundancy.

× Well, did I didn't, I mean, I just, uh, prefer comfortable clothes, right?

✓ Well, no, I didn't. I mean, I just prefer comfortable clothes, right?

Auxiliary verb and double negation: 'did I didn't' is ungrammatical. Use 'no, I didn't' or 'I didn't' alone. Keep present preference 'I just prefer'.

× So most of the time it would choose, uh, show baggy shirts and uh, uh, pants to come alongside and it turns out pretty well everything.

✓ So most of the time I choose baggy shirts and pants, and it usually turns out pretty well.

Sentence structure and pronoun errors: 'it would choose' is wrong; speaker 'I' should choose. 'show baggy shirts' unclear—use 'baggy shirts'. 'to come alongside' is unnecessary. Simplify to coherent clauses.

× I could wear it anywhere in anytime.

✓ I can wear them anywhere at any time.

Modal and pronoun: 'could' implies ability in past; use 'can' for general truth. 'it' should be 'them' for plural clothes. Use 'any time' or 'anytime' consistently; 'at any time' is correct.

× I think weekdays and weekends, uh, doesn't feel difference to me that much.

✓ I think weekdays and weekends don't feel very different to me.

Subject-verb agreement and adjective use: 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'weekdays and weekends'. Use comparative adjective 'different' with 'very' for natural phrasing.

× Therefore I most of the time I wear a shirt and pants all the time all the time and it didn't really mind me or bother me that much.

✓ Therefore, most of the time I wear a shirt and pants, and it doesn't really bother me that much.

Tense and redundancy: remove duplicate 'all the time'. Use present simple 'doesn't' for habitual action and 'bother me' rather than 'didn't really mind me' which is ungrammatical.

× I think I prefer light colour outfits since it is very easy to match with different accessories and often in the hot weather like colours tend to feel much comfortable and cooler.

✓ I prefer light-coloured outfits since they are easy to match with different accessories, and in hot weather light colours tend to feel more comfortable and cooler.

Quantifier and agreement: 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'outfits'. Hyphenate 'light-coloured' (or 'light-colored') and use 'light colours' consistently. 'much comfortable' is incorrect; use 'more comfortable'. Clarify word order for natural English.