Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문장 구조를 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 만들고 어색한 단어 사용을 줄이세요. 색깔을 말할 때 대문자 사용 실수(Gray)와 같은 작은 실수도 피하고, 한두 문장으로 이유를 덧붙여 답을 풍부하게 하세요. 예: 주제문 + 간단한 이유/상황(예: 일할 때 편해서).

예시: I prefer simple clothing in neutral colours like black and white because they are easy to match and look professional.

제안: 문법(동사 형태, 관사)과 문장 연결을 교정하세요. 이유를 말할 때 문장을 더 명확하게 연결하고 중복 표현(look you smart, simple and smart)을 줄이세요. 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 설명하세요.

예시: I prefer to wear smart clothes because I often attend conferences and meetings, so dressing simply and smartly helps me make a professional impression.

제안: 답변을 직접적으로 시작하고 불필요한 접속사(And)를 제거하세요. 동사 형태와 단수·복수 일치(T-shirts looks → T-shirts look)를 고치고, 간단한 이유를 덧붙여 더 설득력 있게 만드세요.

예시: Not really. I prefer wearing shirts rather than T-shirts because T-shirts look too casual for my work.

제안: 시간 표현과 시제 사용을 바로잡으세요(when tomorrow → if it's a meeting tomorrow / before a meeting). 어색한 표현(prepare to wear the shirts, like simply) 대신 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고 불필요한 말버벙(uh)과 단편적인 문장을 줄이세요.

예시: Yes. If I have a meeting or conference the next day, I usually spend more time choosing a simple, smart shirt to wear.

제안: 음성언어의 비문(umm, uh)을 제거하고 시제와 어휘를 자연스럽게 고치세요(I'm usually wearing → I usually wear). 중복 표현(simple, easy) 대신 더 구체적인 단어를 쓰고 연결어(However, On weekends)를 사용해 비교를 명확히 하세요.

예시: On weekdays I usually wear smart clothes such as shirts and tailored trousers. On weekends, however, I prefer casual outfits like T-shirts, shorts and trainers.

제안: 문장을 더 간결하고 문법적으로 정확하게 만드세요. 복잡한 표현(no need to choose the one in front of closure) 대신 간단히 이유를 말하고 불필요한 말(umm)과 어색한 표현(spending more less time to wearing) 을 수정하세요.

예시: I prefer black or white because they are simple and save time when I'm getting dressed since they match easily.

× I prefer very simple looks like black, white or Gray.

✓ I prefer very simple looks, such as black, white, or gray.

'Like' is informal and ambiguous when giving examples; 'such as' or 'for example' is more appropriate. 'Gray' should be lowercase. A comma improves readability.

× I prefer wear smart clothes because I usually work outside and go conferences have meetings.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because I usually work outside and attend conferences and meetings.

After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to wear' (or gerund 'wearing') — the original omitted 'to'. 'Go conferences have meetings' is ungrammatical; use verbs 'attend' and connect nouns with 'and'.

× So wearing simple and smart is look you smart.

✓ So wearing simple and smart clothes makes you look smart.

'Is look you smart' is incorrect word order and verb choice. Use 'makes you look' to express causation. Include noun 'clothes' for clarity.

× And not really, I prefer to wearing shirts instead of T-shirts because T-shirts looks quite casual.

✓ Not really, I prefer wearing shirts instead of T-shirts because T-shirts look quite casual.

Use 'I prefer wearing' (not 'prefer to wearing'). 'T-shirts looks' should be 'T-shirts look' for plural agreement.

× Yes, when tomorrow is a meeting day or conference day, I'm trying to prepare to wear, uh, the shirts. Like simply.

✓ Yes, when tomorrow is a meeting day or a conference day, I try to prepare my shirts and keep my outfit simple.

'I'm trying to' is awkward for a habitual or planned action; 'I try to' or 'I will try to' fits better. 'Prepare to wear the shirts' is unnatural; use 'prepare my shirts' or 'choose my outfit'. 'Like simply' should be 'keep my outfit simple'.

× Obviously during weekdays I'm usually wearing umm, smart looks like shirts and uh, simple trousers.

✓ Obviously during weekdays I usually wear smart clothes like shirts and simple trousers.

'I'm usually wearing' is acceptable but 'I usually wear' is more natural for habitual actions. Use 'smart clothes' rather than 'smart looks' and remove filler sounds.

× But on the weekends I'm trying to get more simple and easy outfit like T-shirts and shorts and trainers.

✓ But on the weekends I try to wear simpler, more casual outfits like T-shirts, shorts, and trainers.

'I'm trying to get' is awkward; 'I try to wear' or 'I prefer' is better. Use comparative 'simpler' and adjective order 'more casual'. Plural 'outfits' matches list of items.

× I think I like black or white because it looks more simple and there's no need to umm, choose the one in front of closure and spending more less time to wearing black or white.

✓ I think I like black or white because they look simpler, and there is no need to decide in front of the closet, so I spend less time choosing black or white.

Subject-verb agreement: 'black or white' refers to colors plural so use 'they look'. 'More simple' -> 'simpler'. 'Choose the one in front of closure' is unclear; use 'decide in front of the closet'. 'Spending more less time to wearing' should be 'spend less time choosing'.