Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail and a brief reason. Avoid redundancy and correct verb forms (e.g., “helps me relax”).

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes. For example, I usually wear jeans and a top because my job involves a lot of movement, and these clothes let me move freely and stay relaxed.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct expressions (e.g., “I prefer casual clothes because they keep me comfortable”). Use a linking phrase to connect reason. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because they keep me relaxed while working. Since my job requires a lot of physical movement, smart clothes would restrict me and be impractical.

제안: Combine short sentences for natural flow and correct phrasing (e.g., “they help me feel relaxed”). Add a brief example or frequency phrase to enrich content.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts regularly because they help me feel relaxed and allow me to move easily. For instance, I often wear them during busy shifts when I need to bend and lift items.

제안: Make phrasing more natural and concise. Use linking words (e.g., “because”) and avoid repetition. State frequency and give one specific detail about how you decide.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because most days I wear T-shirts and jeans. Usually I just pick a color depending on my mood or the weather.

제안: Correct repetition and awkward phrases. Use one clear contrast sentence (weekdays vs weekends) and be specific about weekend clothing. Avoid typos like “requires requires” and unclear term “lower pajamas.”

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts and jeans because my job involves a lot of physical work. On weekends I dress more casually at home, often in loose pajamas or sweatpants to relax.

제안: This answer is clear and specific. To improve, add a brief reason why you choose these colours and use natural phrasing (e.g., “I prefer light colours in summer because they keep me cool”).

예시: It depends on the season: in summer I prefer light colours like white because they reflect heat and keep me cool, while in winter I choose dark colours such as black or navy because they feel warmer and more suitable for the season.

× I like to wear something casual and relaxing as my job profile needs more moving so I prefer jeans and top often it helps me relaxed.

✓ I like to wear casual, comfortable clothes because my job requires a lot of movement, so I often prefer jeans and a top; they help me stay relaxed.

Run-on sentence, missing articles and awkward word order. Combine clauses with appropriate conjunctions and punctuation, use article 'a' before 'top', and replace 'relaxing' with 'comfortable' or 'stay relaxed' to match meaning. Use: subject + verb + object; insert commas and conjunctions to connect reasons clearly.

× I prefer casual and comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes as I've worn myself to be completely relaxed while working.

✓ I prefer casual and comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I want to be completely relaxed while working.

Incorrect use of present perfect 'I've worn myself' and reflexive idea. Use a modal/phrase expressing desire or intention ('I want to be') to show purpose. Keep tense present for general preference.

× My job profile requires more physical movement, so smart clothes would hinder my movements.

✓ My job requires a lot of physical movement, so smart clothes would hinder my movement.

Redundant phrase 'job profile' and slight agreement/word choice issue. Use 'My job requires' and 'a lot of' for natural expression; 'movement' singular is more idiomatic here.

× Yes indeed. I wear T-shirts regularly as I find myself relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do. I wear T-shirts regularly because they help me feel relaxed.

Awkward phrasing 'I find myself relaxed.' Use 'they help me feel relaxed' to clarify cause-effect and natural present tense expression. Add comma after interjection.

× I can do a lot of physical movement in T-shirts.

✓ I can move around a lot in T-shirts.

Awkward collocation 'do a lot of physical movement.' Use natural verb 'move around a lot' to express ability to be active while wearing T-shirts.

× Actually, no, I don't spend a lot of time in choosing what I want to wear, as most of my outfits consist of T-shirts and jeans of various colors.

✓ Actually, no. I don't spend a lot of time choosing what to wear because most of my outfits are T-shirts and jeans in various colors.

Unnecessary preposition 'in choosing' and wordy structure. Use 'choosing' without 'in' and simplify 'what I want to wear' to 'what to wear'. Use 'are' instead of 'consist of' for simplicity.

× So it all comes to which color I want to wear.

✓ So it mostly depends on which color I want to wear.

Unidiomatic phrase 'it all comes to'. Use 'depends on' to convey dependence; add 'mostly' for nuance.

× But it would be a T-shirt, I know that.

✓ But it will usually be a T-shirt; I'm sure of that.

Tense and modality awkward: 'would be' is speculative. Use 'will usually be' for habitual choice and 'I'm sure of that' for certainty. Use semicolon or separate sentences.

× Yes, definitely. On weekdays I prefer wearing T-shirts and jeans as I have a lot of work to do on weekdays and these clothes allow me to move comfortably as my job requires me requires a lot of physical work.

✓ Yes, definitely. On weekdays I prefer T-shirts and jeans because I have a lot of work to do and these clothes let me move comfortably since my job requires a lot of physical effort.

Repetition ('on weekdays') and duplicated verb 'requires me requires'. Remove redundancy, correct verb duplication, use 'let me move' and 'physical effort' for natural phrasing.

× On weekends I prefer lower pajamas.

✓ On weekends I prefer to wear loose pajamas.

'Lower pajamas' is incorrect collocation and missing infinitive 'to wear'. Likely intended 'loose pajamas' meaning comfortable sleepwear. Use 'to wear' for clarity.

× I would say it all depends upon the season.

✓ I would say it all depends on the season.

'Depends upon' is not wrong but formal; 'depends on' is more natural in spoken English. Replace to suit conversational tone.

× In summers I usually prefer light colored clothes like white and in winters I would rather go for dark colours like black, dark blue.

✓ In summer I usually prefer light-colored clothes like white, and in winter I prefer darker colors like black or dark blue.

Use singular 'summer'/'winter' for general statements, hyphenate 'light-colored', use parallel structure 'I prefer' not 'I would rather go for' for consistency, and 'darker colors' for contrast.