Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear, but slightly wordy and has a small grammar issue (“in where I live” should be “where I live”). Make the answer more concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect reason.

예시: I usually wear simple, comfortable T-shirts because it’s hot where I live. For example, I choose lightweight cotton T-shirts that breathe well so I stay cool during the day.

제안: Good content and clear preference, but repetition (“comfortable, comfortable”) and a small awkward phrase (“when the occasion asks for it”). Make it tighter: one topic sentence, one linking word, one specific example of when you wear smart clothes.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they’re easy to move in and versatile. However, when I attend formal events like job interviews or weddings, I wear smart outfits such as a dress shirt or blazer.

제안: Short and direct—good. To improve, add a specific reason or brief example and a linking word to show cause or preference.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially light-colored, soft-cotton ones, because they keep me cool and are easy to wash.

제안: Good structure (past habit vs present). Improve grammar and conciseness: avoid wordiness like “I'm a person who would prefer”; use clearer tense and linking words. Give a brief specific example of your routine.

예시: I used to spend a long time choosing clothes, but now I rarely take more than 30 minutes because I prioritize comfort. For instance, I pick a breathable top and then choose matching jeans or shorts.

제안: Answer addresses the question but is repetitive and a bit confusing (phrases like “a bit more casual than comfortable clothing” are unclear). Remove filler like “'cause”, use one clear contrast sentence with linking words, and give a concrete example of each style.

예시: Yes. During weekdays I wear slightly smarter casual clothes like polo shirts and chinos because I go out for errands, whereas on weekends I wear loungewear or sweatpants at home for maximum comfort.

제안: Very clear, specific and well-structured with an example. To improve, use a linking word to start the explanation and replace “actually” with a more natural connector; keep it concise.

예시: I like different colours depending on the weather. For instance, in hot weather I prefer light shades like white or yellow, while in cold weather I choose darker tones such as maroon or black.

× I love wearing simple T-shirts with comfortable fabric because it's usually hot in where I live, so I prefer to have something that would feel a bit cool for me.

✓ I love wearing simple T-shirts made of comfortable fabric because it's usually hot where I live, so I prefer something that feels a bit cool for me.

The phrase 'hot in where I live' uses an incorrect preposition; remove 'in' and use 'where I live'. 'With comfortable fabric' is not the best collocation; use 'made of comfortable fabric'. 'Would feel' is unnecessary modal; use present simple 'feels' for general preference.

× I prefer to wear comfortable, comfortable and casual clothes. They're easier to move in and I can style them however I want.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes. They're easy to move in and I can style them however I want.

The word 'comfortable' is repeated unnecessarily; remove the duplicate. Use 'easy to move in' instead of 'easier to move in' only if comparing; original context expresses general reason, so 'easy' is natural. This fixes redundancy and adjective choice.

× I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but ever since I learned that I'm a person who would prefer comfort over style, I no longer needed more than 30 minutes in choosing my clothes.

✓ I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but ever since I realized that I prefer comfort over style, I no longer need more than 30 minutes to choose my clothes.

Mixed tenses: 'ever since' requires present perfect or present for ongoing result. 'Learned' is acceptable but 'realized' is more natural; 'I'm a person who would prefer' is awkward—use 'I prefer'. 'No longer needed' incorrectly uses past; use present 'no longer need' because this is a current habit. Use 'to choose' not 'in choosing'. Also replace 'would prefer' with simple present.

× Yes, 'cause on weekdays it's usually 'cause I have errands outside, but on weekends I usually stay at home.

✓ Yes, because on weekdays I usually have errands outside, but on weekends I usually stay at home.

Using ''cause' twice is informal and repetitive; replace with 'because' and remove extra 'it's'. The original has sentence fragmenting and redundancy; using a full conjunction clarifies reason.

× So my clothes during the weekdays are a bit more casual than comfortable clothing.

✓ So my clothes during the weekdays are a bit more formal than my weekend clothes, or simply 'a bit less comfortable than on weekends'.

The comparison 'more casual than comfortable' is illogical—casual and comfortable are different qualities. Clarify by comparing weekday and weekend clothes: say 'more formal than my weekend clothes' or 'less comfortable than on weekends'. Choose the version that matches intended meaning.

× And for the weekends I go for 100% comfortable clothing.

✓ And for the weekends I go for completely comfortable clothing.

'100%' as numeral in speech is informal; replace with adverb 'completely'. 'Go for' is acceptable; change improves register and grammatical clarity.

× I'm fine with any colored clothes, but it would actually depend on the weather.

✓ I'm fine with clothes of any color, but it actually depends on the weather.

'Any colored clothes' is awkward; use 'clothes of any color'. 'Would actually depend' mixes conditionals—use 'actually depends' for general truth.

× For example, if it's hot I'd prefer light colored clothes like white or yellow, and if it's cold I'd prefer dark colored clothes like maroon or black.

✓ For example, if it's hot I'd prefer light-colored clothes like white or yellow, and if it's cold I'd prefer dark-colored clothes like maroon or black.

Compound adjectives before nouns should be hyphenated: 'light-colored' and 'dark-colored'. This fixes standard adjective formation. Otherwise sentence is correct.