Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (“umm”, “uh”), correct verb agreement, and add one specific detail to enrich your answer (e.g., fabric or favorite outfit). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I usually dress depending on the occasion. For everyday life I prefer casual T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to wash. However, for business events I wear tailored shirts and skirts, especially in neutral colors, so I look professional and put-together.

제안: Clarify and correct word choice (e.g., “formal clothes” vs “a formal outfit”), avoid contradiction and be explicit about frequency. Use a linking phrase to contrast habits and exceptions.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I work remotely and hardly ever meet visitors. However, when I have an important meeting or a special event, I wear a smart outfit to appear professional.

제안: Good enthusiasm but reduce repetition and improve cohesion: use fewer short phrases and combine reasons with linking words. Give a specific example (favorite T-shirt type or fabric) to increase lexical range.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. Also, I exercise frequently—I go dancing and to the gym—so cotton or moisture-wicking T-shirts are ideal for me.

제안: Answer more directly and logically: avoid unclear sentences about finances. State how much time you spend, then explain with reasons. Use linking words for contrast and correct grammar.

예시: Not really — I rarely spend much time choosing clothes for casual occasions because I have a simple wardrobe. However, for formal meetings I sometimes take longer to decide because I want to look appropriate and I might need to borrow or buy something suitable.

제안: Clear and coherent answer — remove a couple of repetitive phrases and add a brief example to make it more specific (e.g., what you wear on weekends when you go out).

예시: There isn’t much difference because I work from home; I wear comfortable casual clothes most days. If I go out at the weekend for dinner or meetings, I change into a smart outfit such as a blouse and tailored trousers.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: correct phrases like “the most half” and “I most never”. Provide one clear reason and a brief example of a neutral outfit. Use linking words to order ideas.

예시: Most of my clothes are black, white and gray because I prefer neutral colors that are easy to mix and match. I have tried bright colors occasionally, but they usually don’t suit me, so I stick to neutrals like a gray sweater with black jeans.

× Umm, this is really depends on the occasion.

✓ Umm, this really depends on the occasion.

Use simple present 'depends' with subject 'this'; do not add auxiliary 'is'. Remove 'is' to form correct subject-verb structure.

× for the normal days, I just wear casual T-shirts and jeans, which makes me very comfortable.

✓ On normal days, I just wear casual T-shirts and jeans, which make me very comfortable.

Use preposition 'on' with 'days' and plural subject 'T-shirts and jeans' requires plural verb 'make'. Also 'normal days' does not need 'the'.

× But for the business work, uh, the occasion needs a dress code.

✓ But for business work, the occasion may require a dress code.

Phrase 'the business work' is awkward; use 'business work' or 'business occasions'. 'Occasion needs' is unnatural; use 'may require' to express possibility and correct verb-object structure.

× I may wear shirts, skirts, that's it.

✓ I may wear shirts or skirts; that's it.

Use 'or' to list alternatives instead of a comma. Separate final comment with a semicolon or period for clarity.

× Well, I prefer comfortable casual clothes because I work remotely and rarely need to attend formal visitors events.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable casual clothes because I work remotely and rarely need to attend formal visitor events.

Use 'visitor events' (compound noun) or 'events for visitors'. 'Formal visitors events' is ungrammatical; remove plural article. Alternatively 'formal visiting events' could work but 'visitor events' is clearer.

× I find a formal clothes more practical for daily tasks at home, although I do wear smart clothes for important meetings or special occasions.

✓ I find formal clothes more practical for daily tasks at home, although I do wear smart clothes for important meetings or special occasions.

Do not use indefinite article 'a' with uncountable/plural 'clothes'. Use 'formal clothes' (plural) without 'a'.

× First, T-shirts can be very comfortable and easy to handle.

✓ First, T-shirts can be very comfortable and easy to wear.

'Handle' is incorrect collocation here; 'wear' is the appropriate verb for clothing. Tense is fine but word choice needs correction.

× Second, I like to do a lot of workout, and I like dancing and I like to go to the gym.

✓ Second, I like to do a lot of workouts, and I like dancing and going to the gym.

Use plural 'workouts' or 'workout activities'. For parallel structure, use gerund forms consistently: 'dancing and going to the gym' rather than mixing 'I like to ...' repeatedly.

× To be honest, most of the time if the occasion is casual it won't be a trouble for me in choosing clothes.

✓ To be honest, most of the time if the occasion is casual, it won't be a problem for me to choose clothes.

Use 'problem' not 'trouble' here and correct the verb pattern: 'for me to choose' is standard. Add comma after conditional clause for clarity.

× But if someone told me I have to attend some formal meetings since I don't have that much, I don't have money.

✓ But if someone told me I had to attend some formal meetings and I didn't have much money, ...

Sequence of tenses and pronoun reference: in a conditional past-tense report use 'told me I had' and 'didn't have much money'. Also 'that much' needs a noun ('money') and should follow negative structure; sentence likely incomplete—add result clause if needed.

× Since I work from home and I rarely need to attend the office, there isn't much difference between my weekdays and weekend clothes.

✓ Since I work from home and rarely need to go to the office, there isn't much difference between my weekday and weekend clothes.

Use 'go to the office' rather than 'attend the office'. Use 'weekday and weekend clothes' or 'weekdays and weekend' -> here 'weekday' as adjective singular. Original verb 'there isn't' is fine.

× I usually wear comfortable casual clothes at home and only change into smart office when I go out for meetings or special occasions.

✓ I usually wear comfortable casual clothes at home and only change into smart office wear when I go out for meetings or special occasions.

'Smart office' is incomplete; use 'smart office wear' or 'smart office clothes'. Add noun 'wear' to complete phrase.

× I think you will find the most half my clothes are black, white and Gray because I prefer neutral colors.

✓ I think you'll find that most of my clothes are black, white and gray because I prefer neutral colors.

Use contraction 'you'll find that' and 'most of my clothes' (not 'the most half'). 'Gray' should be lowercase. Fix word order and articles for natural English.

× I try wearing bright colors a few times but I found that they don't suit me well and I most never wear them again.

✓ I tried wearing bright colors a few times but I found that they don't suit me well and I mostly never wear them again.

Use past tense 'tried' to match 'found'. Use 'mostly never' or better 'rarely' instead of 'most never'. 'Most never' is ungrammatical; 'mostly' modifies 'never' awkward—prefer 'rarely'.