Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason or example. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” smoothly and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I like wearing miniskirts and bright camisoles because they suit my style and make me feel confident. For example, my friends often compliment me when I wear them, which boosts my mood.

제안: Good structure and content. Make it more concise and use a clearer linking phrase to contrast choices (e.g., “however” or “but”). Limit to 2–3 sentences and be specific about occasions.

예시: It depends on the occasion. Usually I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for outings with friends, but I dress smartly for work or formal meetings.

제안: Avoid repetition and tighten phrasing. Use linking words like “however” to contrast home and outside choices, and give one clear reason for your preference.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts at home—usually oversized ones I borrow from my family. However, when I go out I prefer camisoles because I feel they make me look more attractive.

제안: Be more concise and reduce redundancy (e.g., “I want to look my best” repeated). Give one specific example of what you do when you can’t find clothes. Use linking words like “so” or “therefore.”

예시: Yes, I often struggle to choose an outfit for a date because I want to look my best. If I can't find anything suitable, I usually go shopping the day before.

제안: Correct idea but watch grammar and word choice (“beat” is incorrect). Keep it short, explain briefly why styles are the same, and give one example of special-event dressing.

예시: No, I usually wear the same clothes on weekdays and weekends because I have a small wardrobe. However, for special events I buy something new to look more presentable.

제안: Avoid hesitation sounds (“uh”) and unclear words (“quotes”). Be specific and concise: name colours and explain why they suit you, using a linking word like “because.”

예시: I prefer pastel and bright colours because they suit my skin tone. In particular, light blue and pale yellow look best on me.

× I like to wear miniskirts and bright colored camisoles because I think I look good in it and my friends would often compliment me when I wear one.

✓ I like to wear miniskirts and bright-colored camisoles because I think I look good in them and my friends often compliment me when I wear them.

Pronoun must agree in number with its antecedent. 'Miniskirts and camisoles' is plural, so use plural pronouns 'them' instead of 'it' or 'one'. Also simplify modal tense: 'would often compliment' is unnecessary; use 'often compliment'. Hyphenate 'bright-colored' and ensure consistent plural reference.

× It depends on where I am going, but usually I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes since most of my trips are only for friendship dates such as visiting a restaurant or a cafe. But when it's for office, I would select smart clothes.

✓ It depends on where I am going, but usually I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes since most of my outings are just social visits to a restaurant or a cafe. But when it is for the office, I choose smart clothes.

Maintain consistent present tense; avoid mixing 'would select' with present context. Use 'outings' or 'social visits' instead of 'trips' for local social occasions. Use 'choose' for habitual present. Also add article 'the' before 'office' and use comma separation for adjectives.

× Whenever I'm at home I usually wear big shirts that I usually borrow from my mom or with my brother.

✓ Whenever I'm at home I usually wear big shirts that I borrow from my mom or my brother.

Use correct preposition/structure: 'borrow from my mom or my brother' is correct; 'borrow ... with' is incorrect. Remove duplicate 'usually'.

× But outside I typically like to wear camisoles since I think that I look better in it and more attractive in it.

✓ But outside I typically like to wear camisoles since I think I look better and more attractive in them.

Plural antecedent 'camisoles' requires plural pronoun 'them'. Also avoid repeating 'in it'; combine adjectives after 'look'.

× Yes, oftentimes I would have a hard time selecting what clothes I should wear for a date specifically because I want to look at my best.

✓ Yes, often I have a hard time selecting what clothes I should wear for a date because I want to look my best.

Use simple present for habitual situations: 'I have a hard time' not 'I would have'. 'Look my best' is the correct idiomatic phrase; remove 'at'. Also 'oftentimes' can be simplified to 'often'.

× I want to look presentable to the one that I am meeting with and there are often times when I can't find anything to wear in my closet, so I would buy something.

✓ I want to look presentable to the person I am meeting, and there are times when I can't find anything to wear in my closet, so I buy something.

Use 'person' instead of awkward 'the one'. Use present simple for habitual action: 'I buy something' instead of 'I would buy something'. Remove unnecessary 'with' after 'meeting' and simplify 'often times' to 'times' or 'often'.

× No I don't because I only have a few pieces in my closet so I usually just beat what I wear on weekdays and weekends, but on special events or gatherings I try to buy something new so I could look more presentable.

✓ No, I don't because I only have a few pieces in my closet, so I usually wear the same things on weekdays and weekends. On special occasions or gatherings I try to buy something new so I can look more presentable.

Fix sentence structure and word choice: 'beat' is wrong word; use 'wear the same things'. Add commas for clarity. Use 'occasions' instead of 'events' for natural phrasing and present ability 'can' instead of 'could' for intent.

× I like pastel quotes and bright colored ones because I believe that it, uh, looks best on my skin tone, specifically light shades of blue and yellow.

✓ I like pastel colors and bright colors because I believe they look best on my skin tone, specifically light shades of blue and yellow.

Replace incorrect word 'quotes' with 'colors'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural noun 'colors'. 'Bright-colored ones' is awkward; use 'bright colors'. Remove filler 'uh'. 'Look' should match plural subject.