Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and vary sentence structures; add a brief specific example to support your preference. Avoid repeating similar ideas (comfortable/practical/simple).

예시: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they’re comfortable and easy to move in. For example, when I run errands or meet friends on weekends I usually wear a cotton T-shirt and slim jeans because they’re low-maintenance and practical.

제안: Complete your sentences and give a clear reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “some things” and finish your thought about what people tend to do. Use one or two sentences max.

예시: I prefer smart clothes for special events because they make me feel more professional and confident. For example, I wear a blazer and dress trousers to presentations so others take me more seriously.

제안: Finish your sentence and use correct grammar (e.g., “T-shirts help me not feel restricted” or “allow me to move easily”). Give a specific instance of when you prefer a T‑shirt.

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts don’t restrict movement, so I often wear them when I travel or exercise. For instance, I chose a breathable T-shirt on a day trip to the mountains because it was more comfortable for hiking.

제안: Avoid repetition and fix grammar (e.g., “choosing the right clothes is important because they boost confidence”). Provide a brief specific example of when you spend extra time choosing clothes.

예시: Yes, I do. I think choosing the right outfit helps me feel more confident, so I take extra time before interviews or presentations. For example, I plan my outfit the night before an important meeting to ensure it’s appropriate and neat.

제안: Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g., “I tend to wear smarter clothes on weekdays because of classes; on weekends I prefer casual clothes”). Be specific about what you wear and why.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual outfits like a shirt and chinos for classes, whereas on weekends I prefer sweatshirts and joggers because I relax at home or meet friends informally.

제안: Use natural adjectives and correct grammar (e.g., “cream makes me feel calm” and “green suits me and brightens my skin tone”). Explain briefly why a colour suits you with one specific detail.

예시: I prefer cream because it has a calm, neutral feel that suits my style. I also like green, especially olive shades, because they complement my skin tone and make me look fresher.

× I prefer wearing casual clothes such as pants and T-shirt.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes such as pants and T-shirts.

Use the -ing form 'wearing' is acceptable (preference), but 'T-shirt' should be plural to match 'pants' and the general plural noun for types of clothes. Also use consistent plural form for items in a list. Suggestion: Use 'T-shirts' when speaking generally about that garment.

× This is because wearing some things might makes me feel comfortable and professional.

✓ This is because wearing some things might make me feel comfortable and professional.

After the modal-like expression 'might', the base form of the verb 'make' must be used, not the third-person singular 'makes'. Suggestion: Use 'might make' or 'may make' + base verb.

× In addition, I think people tend to.

✓ In addition, I think people tend to do the same.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. 'Tend to' requires a verb (infinitive) to complete the thought. Suggestion: Complete with a verb phrase such as 'do the same' or 'dress similarly'.

× Wearing T-shirt can avoid me from being restricted because I can go from one place to another places easily.

✓ Wearing a T-shirt can prevent me from feeling restricted because I can go from one place to another easily.

Use the article 'a' with singular countable 'T-shirt'. 'Avoid someone from' is not correct; use 'prevent someone from' or 'stop someone from'. 'Being restricted' is better as 'feeling restricted'. Remove redundant plural 'another places' -> 'another'. Suggestion: Use 'a T-shirt', 'prevent me from feeling restricted', and 'from one place to another'.

× In addition, it also help me to.

✓ In addition, it also helps me.

The verb must agree with singular subject 'it' so use 'helps'. Also the sentence is incomplete with trailing 'to'; remove it or add an object ('to stay comfortable'). Suggestion: Use complete clause: 'it also helps me' or 'it also helps me to stay comfortable'.

× This is because I believe that choosing the right clothes really important because it can help you to feel more confident.

✓ This is because I believe that choosing the right clothes is really important; it can help you feel more confident.

Missing verb 'is' after 'really important'. Also avoid redundant 'because' twice; use a semicolon or split into two sentences. 'Help you to feel' is acceptable but more natural as 'help you feel'. Suggestion: Add 'is' and simplify the sentence structure.

× In addition, choosing right clothes can help to in improve your.

✓ In addition, choosing the right clothes can help improve your confidence.

Missing article 'the' before 'right clothes'. Word order 'help to in improve your' is incorrect—extra preposition 'in' and wrong placement. Add the noun 'confidence' to complete the thought. Suggestion: Use 'choosing the right clothes can help improve your confidence'.

× Usually during the weekday I tend to wear smart clothes because I have classes, but during the weekend I more prefer I prefer wearing schedule clothes because I do not go anywhere.

✓ Usually during the weekday I tend to wear smart clothes because I have classes, but during the weekend I prefer wearing casual clothes because I do not go anywhere.

Remove duplicated 'I more prefer I prefer'. Use 'prefer' (no 'more' with another 'prefer'). 'Schedule clothes' is incorrect word choice; likely 'casual clothes'. Also 'weekday' vs 'weekdays'—use 'weekdays' or 'during the week'. Suggestion: Simplify to 'I prefer wearing casual clothes on weekends'.

× For me, I like cream colour.

✓ For me, I like the cream color.

Use the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific color preference. Also 'colour'/'color' variant acceptable; keep consistent. In American English use 'color'. Suggestion: 'I like the cream color' or 'I like cream'.

× This is because cream colour makes me to feel calm.

✓ This is because the cream color makes me feel calm.

Don't use 'to' after 'makes me'; use bare infinitive 'feel'. Add article 'the' before 'cream color'. Suggestion: 'the cream color makes me feel calm'.

× Other than that I think green colour sweet with me because it can make my screen tone become more brighter.

✓ Other than that, I think green suits me because it can make my skin tone appear brighter.

'Green colour sweet with me' is ungrammatical: use verb 'suit' for colors, and 'sweet with me' is incorrect. 'Screen tone' likely intended 'skin tone'. 'More brighter' is a double comparative—use 'brighter' alone. Use 'appear brighter' rather than 'become more brighter'. Suggestion: 'green suits me' and 'make my skin tone appear brighter'.