Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use one concise sentence to state preference, then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct grammar (e.g., word order and articles).

예시: I prefer to wear clothes according to the situation. For example, at work I usually choose formal dresses because they look professional and comfortable.

제안: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, give a clear topic sentence, and provide a specific reason with a linking word. Remove fillers and finish your thought in one or two supporting sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and feel more relaxed. Since my workplace doesn’t require a strict dress code, I often wear smart-casual outfits even on weekdays.

제안: Avoid contradiction and repetition. Start with a clear statement (yes or no), explain briefly and give a specific context or example using a linking word. Fix grammar (plural/singular and prepositions).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, but mainly at home or for the gym because they are breathable and easy to move in.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use one clear reason and a simple example. Use correct verb forms and link ideas with words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially for work, so I usually pick my outfit the day before to save time in the morning.

제안: Good direct answer. Improve coherence by combining sentences and using linking words. Be specific about examples and avoid short choppy sentences.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear dresses for work because I dislike suits, whereas on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and explain the change with a specific reason or example. Avoid fragmented phrases and incorrect word choices.

예시: I used to prefer cool, muted tones like gray and blue, but recently I have been introducing warmer colours such as orange and red to make my outfits livelier.

× 'The kind of clothes I buy prefer to wear depends on the situation.'

✓ 'The kind of clothes I prefer to wear depends on the situation.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: The original sentence incorrectly places the verb "prefer" after "clothes I buy" creating a mismatch. The subject is "The kind of clothes I prefer to wear," so put "prefer" immediately after "I". This fixes subject-verb agreement and yields a clear structure.'

× 'At work definitely I would prefer more formal outfits like such as dresses.'

✓ 'At work, I would definitely prefer more formal outfits, such as dresses.'

'Word order and redundancy: "definitely" should be placed where it modifies "prefer." "Like such as" is redundant; use either "like" or "such as." Adding commas improves readability.'

× 'Umm, definitely. I prefer casual clothes because I, I, I like to feel comfortable in any kind of situation, uh, even at work, Uh, fortunately I'm not uh, obliged to wear formal, uh, outfits. So, uh, on, on Mondays.'

✓ 'I prefer casual clothes because I like to feel comfortable in any situation, even at work. Fortunately, I'm not obliged to wear formal outfits, so on Mondays I usually wear casual clothes.'

'Tense and sentence structure: Remove hesitations and repeated words for clarity. Use present simple "prefer" and "like" for habitual preferences. Combine sentences and clarify "so on Mondays" by completing the thought. Punctuation and word order corrected.'

× 'Yes, I, I like to wear T-shirt only when I'm, I'm at home.'

✓ 'Yes, I like to wear T-shirts only when I'm at home.'

'Singular and plural / sentence structure: Use the plural "T-shirts" for general habit. Remove repeated words. Present simple habit requires plural or generic singular with article: "a T-shirt."'

× 'Uh, I don't really feel comfortable wearing T-shirt.'

✓ 'I don't really feel comfortable wearing T-shirts.'

'Singular and plural: When speaking generally, use plural "T-shirts" or add an article "a T-shirt." Here plural is more natural for a general statement.'

× 'Uh, but from time to time I do wear T-shirts at home, uh, especially or for the, for the gym.'

✓ 'But from time to time I do wear T-shirts at home, especially for the gym.'

'Word choice and redundancy: Remove filler words and the redundant "or" and repeated "for the." Simplify to "especially for the gym."'

× 'Unfortunately, yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, uh, especially when it comes to go to work, uh, so to get more prepared and be ready, uh, uh, to go to work, I, I usually choose my, my outfit the day before.'

✓ 'Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when it comes to going to work, so to be more prepared I usually choose my outfit the day before.'

'Verb form and redundancy: Use the gerund "going" after "comes to." Remove repeated fillers and duplicate phrases. Use "to be more prepared" for clarity and correct infinitive/gerund usage.'

× 'Definitely yes. I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.'

✓ 'Yes, definitely. I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and at weekends.'

'Word order and preposition: "Yes, definitely" is more natural. Add "at" before "weekends" or keep parallel structure; either "on weekdays and weekends" is acceptable, but adding "at" clarifies contrast.'

× 'On weekdays generally I wear a formal outfit like dress.'

✓ 'On weekdays I generally wear a formal outfit, like a dress.'

'Article and singular/plural: "dress" needs an article when singular: "a dress." Also move "generally" after the time phrase for natural word order.'

× 'I don't like suits so mostly I wear dresses for work and on weekends I really like casual.'

✓ 'I don't like suits, so I mostly wear dresses for work, and on weekends I prefer casual clothes.'

'Sentence structure and word choice: Add commas for clarity and a subject before "mostly." Replace "I really like casual" with "I prefer casual clothes" to complete the idea and use proper noun phrase.'

× 'I used to prefer cool or muted tones in my clothings, but recently I've been more. Than to introduce more warm scholars like orange, red.'

✓ 'I used to prefer cool or muted tones in my clothing, but recently I've been trying to introduce warmer colors like orange and red.'

'Word form and word choice: "clothings" is incorrect; use uncountable "clothing." "I've been more. Than to introduce" is ungrammatical — replace with "I've been trying to introduce." Use "warmer colors" rather than "warm scholars." Use correct conjunctions and remove the stray period.'