Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail (fabric or occasion), using a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct mistakes (e.g., "They are also made of cotton").

예시: I prefer wearing ethnic clothes because they are comfortable and well-ventilated. For example, my kurta sets are usually made of cotton, which keeps me cool in hot weather.

제안: Good clear answer and reason. Improve coherence by using a linking word and one specific example of your work setting. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid small redundancies.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel confident and relaxed. For example, at my workplace I work long shifts, so I usually choose breathable T-shirts and chinos rather than formal suits.

제안: Good direct answer with reason. Improve by using a linking word and a brief specific detail about fabric or style to show range of vocabulary (e.g., cotton, breathable).

예시: Yes, I often wear T-shirts with trousers. Because light-coloured cotton T-shirts are breathable, I find them especially comfortable in summer.

제안: Organize the answer: start with a topic sentence, then briefly explain why with one clear example. Correct grammar ("I wear them as they are"). Avoid repeating "generally" and overly long sentences.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I start work early. For instance, I usually grab the first clean outfit I find in the morning and rarely iron it before leaving.

제안: Clear contrast but remove hesitations and repetition. Use a linking word to contrast (e.g., "whereas"), and give one brief reason for the weekend choice.

예시: On weekdays I wear T-shirts and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I usually stay in pajamas because I relax at home and value comfort.

제안: Fix small mistakes and be specific: say where you go (e.g., 'go out' or 'go to work') and use clearer linking words (e.g., "however"). Mention one or two colours as examples to show vocabulary variety.

예시: When I go out I prefer black clothes because they look smart and hide stains, however at home I choose light colours like pale blue or beige because they feel calming and comfortable.

× Ethnic wear is more breezy and easy to wear and comfortable.

✓ Ethnic wear is breezier, easier to wear, and more comfortable.

Comparative forms and parallel structure: 'more breezy' and 'easy to wear and comfortable' are awkward. Use comparatives correctly ('breezier', 'easier') and keep parallel structure when listing qualities ('easier to wear, and more comfortable').

× They also cotton made.

✓ They are also made of cotton.

Word order and structure: 'cotton made' is incorrect. Use passive construction 'made of cotton' and include the correct auxiliary 'are' for plural subject 'they'. This fixes both adjective order and verb usage.

× Also, I have long hours of work at my workplace so I don't prefer smart clothes.

✓ Also, I have long working hours at my workplace, so I don't prefer smart clothes.

Collocation and noun forms: 'long hours of work' is acceptable but 'long working hours' is more natural. No third person singular verb error here; label chosen for closest match to improve phrasing.

× I generally prefer to wear T-shirts which are of light colours so that they are comfortable in the summers.

✓ I generally prefer to wear T-shirts that are light-coloured so that they are comfortable in summer.

Preposition and article use: 'which are of light colours' is wordy; use 'that are light-coloured'. 'In the summers' should be 'in summer' for general statements. Also use hyphen in 'light-coloured' for compound adjective.

× In fact, I don't even iron my clothes and I wear they are as they are.

✓ In fact, I don't even iron my clothes; I wear them as they are.

Pronoun case and word order: 'I wear they are as they are' is ungrammatical. Use the object pronoun 'them' and correct word order 'I wear them as they are.' Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses.

× On weekends I prefer to wear pajamas as I prefer to stay at home and uh, I prefer to wear something which is comfortable.

✓ On weekends I prefer to wear pajamas because I prefer to stay at home, and I like to wear something comfortable.

Repetition and gerund usage: Repeating 'I prefer' is redundant. Use 'because' for reason and 'like to wear something comfortable' is more natural than 'prefer to wear something which is comfortable.' Remove filler 'uh'.

× When I go for a book I prefer to wear a clothes which are black in colour since we look smart and they don't get dirty easily.

✓ When I go out, I prefer to wear clothes that are black because they look smart and don't get dirty easily.

Determiners and pronouns: 'go for a book' is unclear; likely 'go out' fits context. 'A clothes' is incorrect—'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Use 'that' for defining relative clause. Change 'we look smart' to 'they look smart' to refer to clothes.

× But at home I prefer to wear light colours so that I feel comfortable and soothing to the eyes.

✓ But at home I prefer to wear light colours so that I feel comfortable and my eyes are soothed.

Adjective/adverb and expression: 'soothing to the eyes' misapplies subject. Reword to 'my eyes are soothed' or 'they are easy on the eyes.' Ensure subject matches the adjective effect.