Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, use correct tenses and clearer phrasing. Start with a topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition (e.g., mentioning heat and sweating twice). Correct grammar: use present tense and natural collocations (e.g., “stay cool” not “sweat all my shirts”).

예시: I usually wear T-shirts because the weather in Thailand is very hot. They help me stay cool and allow me to move easily when I’m doing daily activities.

제안: Use present simple and give a clear reason with a linking word. Avoid past tense unless describing a past habit. Add a brief specific example of activities at home.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I usually stay at home. For example, I often wear a loose T-shirt and shorts when I study or relax.

제안: Avoid vague superlatives and repetition. Give a concise topic sentence and one clear reason supported by a brief detail. Correct article use (“a T-shirt” or “T-shirts are the most comfortable”).

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are very comfortable, and because Thailand is so hot they help me stay cool during the day.

제안: Use present simple for routines and improve grammar. Keep it short: state the habit, give one reason, and add a linking word. Replace informal phrases like “whatever I saw” with “whatever is available”.

예시: No, I don't. I usually wake up late and have little time in the morning, so I just put on whatever is available.

제안: Be consistent with tense and concise. Start with a direct answer, then explain the difference briefly using linking words. Fix small errors (e.g., “need to wear a uniform on weekdays” and “on weekends”).

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear a school uniform, but on weekends I usually wear comfortable, casual T-shirts.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear preference, then one or two specific reasons. Avoid irrelevant or confusing details (the blood comment is unnecessary). Use correct grammar and pluralization (e.g., “white shirts” and “black shirts”).

예시: I prefer white shirts, but I sometimes wear black. I choose black for practical reasons, but white looks cleaner; however, white gets stained more easily, so I save it for less messy occasions.

× I like to wear T-shirts because in Thailand it is very hot and I don't want to sweat all my shirts.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts because in Thailand it is very hot and I don't want to sweat on all my shirts.

The student used 'sweat all my shirts' which is unidiomatic. The correct preposition for body perspiration affecting clothes is 'on' (preposition issue, ID 11), and this also involves pronoun possession clarity; revise to 'sweat on all my shirts' to indicate the shirts get sweaty.

× I wanted to be cozy and move easily when I was wearing my shirt.

✓ I want to be cozy and move easily when I wear my shirt.

The context is a general preference, so present tense should be used. The student used past tense 'wanted' and 'was wearing' incorrectly; change to present simple 'want' and 'wear' to express habitual preference (ID 6 Present tense issue / ID 5 Past tense issue).

× I'd prefer to wear comfortable and casual shirts because I didn't go anywhere far and I just stay at my home all day.

✓ I'd prefer to wear comfortable and casual shirts because I don't go anywhere far and I just stay at home all day.

The clause describes a habitual present situation, so 'didn't go' (past) is incorrect; use the modal/auxiliary 'do' in present negative 'don't go' (modal/auxiliary usage, ID 4) and 'stay at home' omits unnecessary 'my' (pronoun/article issue).

× Yes, I do, as I said, because T-shirt is most comfortable shirt in the world I think.

✓ Yes, I do, as I said, because a T-shirt is the most comfortable shirt in the world, I think.

Missing articles: singular countable noun 'T-shirt' needs an indefinite article 'a'. Superlative 'most comfortable' requires the definite article 'the'. This is an article error (ID 22) and superlative construction (ID 25).

× And in Thailand it's very hot and I don't want to sweat all over my shirt.

✓ And in Thailand it's very hot, and I don't want to sweat all over my shirt.

This sentence is mostly correct; only punctuation/comma needed before 'and' to join clauses. 'All over my shirt' is idiomatic. Classified as minor sentence structure issue (ID 26).

× I don't think so because I usually woke up late and I showered very late so I got no time for choosing my shirt for that day and I would wear it whatever I saw.

✓ I don't think so because I usually wake up late and I shower very late, so I have no time to choose my shirt for the day and I wear whichever one I see.

The student mixed present habitual with past simple 'woke'/'showered' incorrectly; use present simple 'wake' and 'shower' for habits (ID 6). 'Got no time' should be 'have no time' (subject-verb agreement/present tense). 'Choosing' should be 'to choose' (verb form, ID 8). 'Whatever I saw' should be 'whichever one I see' (pronoun and tense correction, ID 12 and 6).

× I go to school and I need to wear uniform.

✓ I go to school and I need to wear a uniform.

Countable noun 'uniform' requires an article 'a' (article error ID 22). Also 'wear uniform' is acceptable in British English, but adding 'a' clarifies for general usage (pronoun/article issue).

× So yes I needed to wear uniform on my weekday every day but in week weekends I usually like to wear just some comfortable and casual T-shirts.

✓ So yes, I need to wear a uniform on weekdays every day, but on weekends I usually like to wear comfortable, casual T-shirts.

The student used past 'needed' instead of present 'need' for a regular requirement (present tense ID 6). Plural/time expressions corrected: 'weekday every day' -> 'weekdays', 'week weekends' -> 'weekends'. Also added article 'a' (ID 22) and corrected adjective order/punctuation (ID 18).

× I'd like to wear white shirt but sometime will be black too.

✓ I'd like to wear a white shirt, but sometimes it will be black too.

Missing article 'a' before 'white shirt' (article error ID 22). 'Sometime' should be plural adverb 'sometimes' (adverb form ID 13). Also add comma before 'but'.

× Depends on the weather because some black shirt will absorb the sunlight and it will be very hot but white shirt it will easy to stain on it and my blood is easy to come out and I don't want my shirt to be blood stained.

✓ It depends on the weather because black shirts absorb sunlight and can make me feel very hot, but white shirts stain easily and if I get a cut the blood can show, so I don't want my shirt to be stained with blood.

Multiple issues: sentence fragment 'Depends on' needs subject 'It' (sentence structure ID 26). 'Some black shirt' -> 'black shirts' (singular/plural ID 1). 'Will absorb the sunlight' better as 'absorb sunlight' for general truth (present tense ID 6). 'White shirt it will easy to stain on it' is ungrammatical: correct 'white shirts stain easily' (adverb placement/verb form ID 20/13). 'My blood is easy to come out' -> 'if I get a cut the blood can show' (sentence clarity/pronoun use ID 12). 'Blood stained' should be 'stained with blood' (preposition/article ID 11/22).