Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then list 2–3 types with brief reasons. Avoid hesitation and filler words, and use correct collocations (e.g., “a particular type of frock” or “certain frocks”).

예시: I prefer comfortable clothing. For everyday wear I usually choose jeans and soft T‑shirts because they are practical and easy to move in, but I also enjoy wearing traditional suits for special occasions because they look elegant.

제안: Give a direct opinion then support it with one clear reason using correct grammar and fewer repetitions. Avoid mixed metaphors; use a simple, relevant comparison if desired.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to concentrate on my day without feeling restricted. For example, when I wear loose jeans and a soft T‑shirt I can move freely and I don’t get distracted by discomfort.

제안: Answer directly and add one specific detail or example. Replace vague phrases like “kind of” with precise descriptions and correct word order.

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing lightweight T‑shirts because they are casual yet neat. For instance, a plain cotton T‑shirt with a smart pair of jeans gives me a relaxed but tidy appearance.

제안: Structure your answer: state briefly that you do, then give two concise, specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., “feeling comfortable in those clothes”). Reduce redundancy.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I focus on quality and fit. For example, I check the fabric and stitching to ensure durability, and I always try items on to make sure they feel comfortable before buying.

× Well, I generally like to wear comfortable clothes as I dress, uh, different clothes.

✓ Well, I generally like to wear comfortable clothes and I dress in different styles.

Original sentence is awkward and has redundancy ('as I dress, different clothes'). This is a sentence structure error. Use a coordinating conjunction to connect ideas and include a preposition for 'dress in different styles.' Suggestion: simplify and combine ideas clearly: 'I generally like to wear comfortable clothes and I dress in different styles.'

× I like particular type of frocks and I like jeans with comfortable T-shirts and I like some kind of traditional suits as well.

✓ I like particular types of frocks, jeans with comfortable T-shirts, and some kinds of traditional suits as well.

'Particular type' and 'some kind of traditional suits' mix singular and plural incorrectly. Articles and nouns must agree in number. Use plural 'types' and 'kinds' to match the plural list of items. Also add commas to separate items.

× It is because I think wearing comfortable clothes are more better than wearing a fashionable clothes.

✓ It is because I think wearing comfortable clothes is better than wearing fashionable clothes.

There is a subject-verb agreement and redundancy problem. 'Wearing comfortable clothes' is a singular gerund phrase requiring 'is' (present tense agreement). 'More better' is redundant; use 'better.' Also 'a fashionable clothes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a.'

× Because what's the point of wearing the fashionable and smart clothes if they are not comfortable and you are feeling uncomfortable in it.

✓ What's the point of wearing fashionable, smart clothes if they are not comfortable and you feel uncomfortable in them?

Starting with 'Because' creates a sentence fragment and 'in it' mismatches plural 'clothes.' Also use parallel verb form 'you feel' instead of 'you are feeling' for general statements. Replace 'the fashionable and smart clothes' with 'fashionable, smart clothes.' Make it a direct question or statement; here a question works.

× It's like taking a fish out of the pond.

✓ It's like taking a fish out of water.

The idiom is incorrect; the common expression is 'taking a fish out of water.' This is idiomatic usage and sentence choice error. Use the standard idiom for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing comfortable lightweight T-shirts as they're more casual and the look they present is kind of comfortable and smart.

✓ Yes, I like wearing comfortable, lightweight T-shirts because they're more casual and the look they present is both comfortable and smart.

Use 'because' rather than 'as' to clarify reason in spoken answers (both acceptable but 'because' clearer). Also add comma between adjectives and replace vague 'is kind of' with 'is both' for clearer adjective use. This addresses adjective/adverb usage and gerund clarity.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time using, uh, choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

'Using' is extraneous and the filler 'uh' should be removed in a corrected sentence. The correct structure is 'spend time' + gerund: 'spend a lot of time choosing clothes.'

× It is because I believe quality of the clothes is the most important thing to consider while buying piece of clothes for you.

✓ It is because I believe the quality of clothes is the most important thing to consider when buying clothes for yourself.

Missing definite article before 'quality' and awkward phrasing 'buying piece of clothes for you.' Use 'the quality of clothes' and 'when buying clothes for yourself.' Also replace 'while' with 'when' for natural timing and correct pronoun 'yourself.'

× Secondly, if you are not feeling the comfortable in that clothes, then there's no point of purchasing it.

✓ Secondly, if you do not feel comfortable in those clothes, then there's no point in purchasing them.

Use correct verb phrase 'feel comfortable' (not 'feeling the comfortable'), correct demonstrative/plural 'those clothes' not 'that clothes,' and correct preposition 'point in' not 'point of.' Also use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'clothes.'

× So I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ So I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but keep as is. This entry confirms structure is correct; no change needed.