Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid awkward phrasing, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect the reason.

예시: I prefer loose, casual clothes like T-shirts and baggy pants because they let me move freely. For example, when I travel or do errands, loose clothing keeps me comfortable all day.

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary and reduce repetition. Give one clear reason with a concrete example and use a linking phrase. Replace unclear words like "cohorts" and remove repeated fragments.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more versatile. For instance, a simple T-shirt and jeans can be mixed with different jackets or shoes, so I don’t need to buy separate smart outfits.

제안: Make the sentence fluent and grammatically correct. Give one specific reason tied to context (climate) and use a linking word. Correct repetition and awkward phrasing.

예시: Yes, I especially like T-shirts because I live in the Philippines, which is a tropical country, so lightweight T-shirts are comfortable in the hot, humid weather.

제안: Structure the response more clearly: give a direct topic sentence, then a brief reason with a specific example. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition. Use a linking word to join reason and example.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick whatever feels comfortable and suits my mood. For example, if I plan to walk a lot, I choose loose pants and a breathable T-shirt so I can move easily.

× It allows me to have free movement of my body whatever be the circumstance.

✓ They allow me to have free movement of my body whatever the circumstance.

The subject 'loose clothes such as T-shirts and baggy pants' is plural, so the verb should be 'allow' not 'allows'. Also 'whatever be the circumstance' is unidiomatic; use 'whatever the circumstance'. Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to plural clothes. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number; replace 'It allows' with 'They allow' and simplify 'whatever be the circumstance' to 'whatever the circumstance'.

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes as it allows me to mix and match it with other with other clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes as they allow me to mix and match them with other clothes.

The pronoun must agree with plural 'clothes', so use 'they' and 'them'. 'It allows' is singular and incorrect. Also remove the duplicated phrase 'with other'. Suggestion: Match pronouns to plural nouns and avoid repetition.

× For example, cohorts can be paired with other cohorts instead of being looking looking for smart clothes that actually it's.

✓ For example, outfits can be paired with other outfits instead of looking for smart clothes.

The original is ungrammatical and contains repetition ('looking looking') and unclear words ('cohorts', 'that actually it's'). 'Outfits' is a clearer noun than 'cohorts'. Remove unnecessary passive and extra words to form a clear sentence. Suggestion: Use clear nouns ('outfits'), avoid repetition, and keep a simple active structure: 'outfits can be paired with other outfits instead of looking for smart clothes.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts especially.

✓ Yes, I especially like wearing T-shirts.

Adverb placement is awkward; 'especially' should modify 'like' and is better placed before it. The original placement after the object is less natural in this context. Suggestion: Place adverbs where they clearly modify the intended verb: 'I especially like wearing T-shirts.'

× I live in a human tropical country which is the which is the Philippines and T-shirt has been one of its most common clothing trend in my country.

✓ I live in a humid tropical country, the Philippines, and T-shirts have been one of the most common clothing trends there.

Errors: 'human' should be 'humid'; redundant 'which is the which is'; 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'one of the most common trends'; 'its' is unclear—use 'there' or 'in my country'. Also 'trend' should be plural 'trends' when saying 'one of the most common'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective ('humid'), fix redundancy, pluralize nouns to match context, and use clear reference words ('there').

× I wear what is comfortable, I wear what's my mood for today, and to choose is to simply find yourself a pair that is comfortable and relaxed at the same time.

✓ I wear what is comfortable; I wear according to my mood today; choosing is simply finding a pair that is comfortable and relaxed at the same time.

Problems: 'I wear what's my mood for today' is ungrammatical—use 'according to my mood today'. 'To choose is to simply find yourself a pair' is awkward and mixes pronouns; maintain subject consistency and verb forms. Use gerund 'choosing' to parallel 'wear'. Suggestion: Keep parallel structure, use correct expressions for mood ('according to my mood today'), and use consistent subjects/pronouns.

× Allows you to have movements.

✓ It allows you to move freely.

The original is a sentence fragment without a clear subject and uses 'movements' awkwardly. Add a subject ('It') and use the verb 'move' with 'freely' for natural expression. Suggestion: Avoid fragments by including a subject and use natural collocations: 'It allows you to move freely.'