Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid fillers (e.g., “umm”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Replace vague phrases with precise ones (e.g., “sportswear leggings” -> “activewear leggings”) and vary vocabulary (comfortable, practical, breathable).

예시: I usually wear comfortable clothes, such as T‑shirts and jeans. For weekends I often choose activewear leggings or shorts because they are breathable and allow me to move freely when I exercise or run errands.

제안: Avoid repetition and clarify the reason for choosing smart clothes. Use linking words (however, whereas) and give one specific example of smart clothing and why you choose it. Watch for awkward phrasing like “enjoy working at wearing.”

예시: It depends on the situation. For example, I prefer casual clothes at weekends because they are comfortable and practical. However, at work I wear smart clothes like a blazer and tailored trousers because they make me look professional and boost my confidence.

제안: Good direct answer and contrast. Improve by combining similar ideas to avoid repetition and add a brief specific example (e.g., why T‑shirts are suitable for particular activities).

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts in my free time because they are comfortable and suitable for activities like walking or casual meetups. For work I avoid them because they appear too informal compared with shirts or blouses.

제안: Make the statement more fluent and complete the final sentence. Use linking words (because, so) and give one concrete example of your decision process (e.g., pick clothes the night before, follow a capsule wardrobe). Avoid fragmented endings.

예시: Usually I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm not into fashion; I focus on practicality and comfort. For example, I prepare a few smart outfits for work on Sundays so I can get dressed quickly during the week.

× I prefer something comfortable, for example T-shirt and jeans.

✓ I prefer something comfortable, for example a T-shirt and jeans.

Use of singular countable noun 'T-shirt' requires an article 'a' when speaking generally about one item. Add 'a' before 'T-shirt' to make it grammatically correct.

× During weekends I usually wear shorts or some sportswear leggings.

✓ During weekends I usually wear shorts or sportswear leggings.

The word 'some' is unnecessary and awkward before a plural noun here. Removing 'some' makes the phrase natural. Also 'sportswear leggings' is acceptable as a compound noun; ensure parallel structure with 'shorts'.

× I feel it is more comfortable and umm easy to move around.

✓ I feel they are more comfortable and, um, easy to move around in.

Referring back to 'shorts or sportswear leggings' requires plural pronoun 'they' and the preposition 'in' for 'move around in'. Inserting commas around 'umm' and using 'they are' corrects subject reference and sentence structure.

× On weekends or in my spare time, I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it is more comfortable and easy to move around.

✓ On weekends or in my spare time, I prefer wearing comfortable, casual clothes because they are more comfortable and easy to move around in.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and add 'in' after 'move around'. Also remove redundant 'and' between adjectives and add a comma for clarity.

× But for work, I enjoy working at wearing smart clothes because it looks more comfortable.

✓ But for work, I enjoy wearing smart clothes because they look more professional.

Phrase 'enjoy working at wearing' is ungrammatical; use 'enjoy wearing'. 'Clothes' requires plural verb 'look' and 'more comfortable' contradicts idea of smart clothes, so 'more professional' is clearer and logical.

× I like wearing T-shirts during weekends or in my spare time because it is comfortable and easy to move in.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts during weekends or in my spare time because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'T-shirts' instead of singular 'it'. This fixes agreement between pronoun and plural noun.

× However, for work, I never wear a T-shirt because it looks too casual and doesn't look smart and professional.

✓ However, for work, I never wear a T-shirt because it looks too casual and doesn't look smart or professional.

Use 'or' to connect the adjectives 'smart' and 'professional'. The rest is correct: 'it looks' matches singular 'a T-shirt'.

× Usually I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, no matter at work or on weekends since I am not a big fan of fashion.

✓ Usually I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes, whether at work or on weekends, since I am not a big fan of fashion.

Use 'whether' instead of 'no matter' to introduce alternatives. Add commas for readability. 'Choosing clothes' is fine as a gerund phrase.

× The clothing I choose are usually practical, comfortable or looking smart.

✓ The clothing I choose is usually practical and comfortable, or it looks smart.

'Clothing' is a singular uncountable noun, so use 'is' not 'are'. Rephrase to avoid listing mixed forms; use parallel structure: adjectives together then separate clause for 'looks smart'.

× They are.

✓ They are.

This fragment 'They are.' is incomplete and unclear in context; ideally remove it or complete the thought (e.g., 'They are practical and comfortable.'). Here corrected earlier sentence supplies a complete version.